The Looker's View [Fringe]

Dec 29, 2011 18:39

The Looker's View
Fringe//PG-13//AltAstrid, AltBroyles

I actually started this ages ago, probably off of something that sweet_anise said, and then I put it away in a folder and forgot about it. I think I was curious of how AltAstrid would actually think about all the events that go around her, or basically how she would interact with the world in general?

New York City is located at 40°43′″N, 74°00′″W. )

fanfic, fringe

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cantarina1 December 30 2011, 18:56:46 UTC
I really loved how you've framed this entire story with numbers. Lovely alt!Astrid piece!

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giallarhorn December 30 2011, 19:16:36 UTC
Thanks! Haha, it got to be more and more difficult to come up with random numerical facts to spread in as it went, but it's good to hear that it worked out :)

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namarie24 December 30 2011, 21:03:22 UTC
This is very interesting! I'd love to see both Astrid and Alt!Astrid explored more on the show, and I like your exploration of her here.

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giallarhorn December 30 2011, 23:14:35 UTC
Thank you! I feel like it'd be hard for the show to properly explore Alt!Astrid the way they set her up, but really needs to some more spotlight time :D

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mack_the_spoon December 30 2011, 21:09:41 UTC
This is really cool. Nicely done, and I could totally picture Alt!Astrid acting and thinking this way.

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giallarhorn December 30 2011, 23:15:46 UTC
Thanks! I wasn't too sure how she might think, since we don't get much details except that she looks for anomalies, which just made me think she was like a sort of human computer of sorts?

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tellshannon815 December 30 2011, 22:04:30 UTC
Love this - I'm always a sucker for an unusual perspective, and this was just perfect Both Astrids need to be explored, and I miss the redverse. Feel free to post at the altverse community overtherefringe as well!

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giallarhorn December 30 2011, 23:07:38 UTC
Thanks! I agree- I want to explore our Astrid's POV, but I haven't figured out how to exactly frame it yet.

Ohh, I didn't know there were more Fringe comms! *goes to post some more promptly*

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tellshannon815 December 30 2011, 23:26:40 UTC
There's quite a few - I mod astrid_fans and lincoln_olivia as well as overtherefringe. There's also charlie_olivia, bishopfans (the Walter and Peter community), oliviaandpeter, peter_astrid and I think there's a couple of Walter/Astrid comms but I don't get that ship.

(Sorry. Edited for error in one username).

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giallarhorn January 1 2012, 22:17:37 UTC
Ohh, I wouldn't have ever guessed that there was character specific comms. Thanks!

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giallarhorn January 1 2012, 22:19:03 UTC
Thanks!

Haha, I feel like that the amount of detail is inordinately large in the beginning, but sort of dwindles out as it goes, which bothers me a little bit.

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