omg someone read this monster of a fic ew. HAHAHAHAHHA. I'm trying to write a second chapter (i'm on it. I promise) but then i realised the 726251 flaws i have already found in my storyline and i don't know what to do /sobs thanks for reading and commenting though!! /smooch
Omg! I love it! Please, please, please continue this story! Awkward Jongin, trolling Chen and cool Kyungsoo are just wonderful! I actually like all the characterisations in this story, so i really hope you will continue this. I really cant wait for the next part! :D
kya! Thank you very much!! I didn't plan my storyline out so it'll take me a while to churn out a quality chapter whithout contradicting what i said in this chapter /sobs i'm a terrible writer. i'm only 1/28581th of the way finished with chapter two. And i can't write. /dead\
omg it's totally worth it to give this fic a try!!!! hahahahahhaha i love long chapter and this fic satisfied my longing for a nice fluffy kaisoo fic! you really need to continue this and more people should read this fic really!!!! i wanted to quote a lot of sentences but i think it'll be too many lol but these are the best. LUHAN GET YOUR TOE OUT OF JUNMYEON’S NOSTRIL.
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“So what’s your sperm count now?”
i swear i almost laughed out loud with my hands clapping like a seal but i held it in because i was reading it in a cafe oh god BUT. THANKS FOR THE FIC IT MADE MY DAY <3 8D
I'M SO TOUCHED /SOBS A LONG COMMENT URGH. THANK YOU SO MUCH KYA. I have to admit i scoffed to myself as i wrote those lines too nyaha. Don't expect an update anytime soon because this is my first fic and what is pre planning? /cackles
i love long chapters too so i try my hardest to keep the word count to 3000+ otherwise i feel it's more of a snippet than a chapter ahahahahahah.
Thank you for such a nice comment ;A; i am not worthy of your love /o/ i had a horrible day and this totally cheered me up :)
okay this is totally HILARIOUS! i need this story to continue, pls author-nim! damn the characterizations, i love all of it! n this is your first fic? dammit its good!
HAHA THANK YOU VERY BERRY MUCH! i'm only 1/3 of the way through chapter 2 and i can't get the characterisations right ;A; WHY DID I PUT THE FOLLOW UP GROUP DATE THE MORNING AFTER? WHY ARE YOU SO STUPID AMY? urgh.
yes this is my first fic. it's so glaringly obvious to me /sobs my dialogue and paragraphing is so amateur-ish. I AM NOT WORTHY OF PRAISE.
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They are so funny here! Hopefully you'll update soon
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thanks for reading and commenting though!! /smooch
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hahahahahhaha i love long chapter and this fic satisfied my longing for a nice fluffy kaisoo fic!
you really need to continue this and more people should read this fic really!!!!
i wanted to quote a lot of sentences but i think it'll be too many lol but these are the best.
LUHAN GET YOUR TOE OUT OF JUNMYEON’S NOSTRIL.
and
“So what’s your sperm count now?”
i swear i almost laughed out loud with my hands clapping like a seal but i held it in because i was reading it in a cafe oh god
BUT. THANKS FOR THE FIC IT MADE MY DAY <3
8D
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i love long chapters too so i try my hardest to keep the word count to 3000+ otherwise i feel it's more of a snippet than a chapter ahahahahahah.
Thank you for such a nice comment ;A; i am not worthy of your love /o/ i had a horrible day and this totally cheered me up :)
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n this is your first fic? dammit its good!
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yes this is my first fic. it's so glaringly obvious to me /sobs my dialogue and paragraphing is so amateur-ish. I AM NOT WORTHY OF PRAISE.
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