(thought I was going to come out as a complete_nutcase in this one) It was very difficult writing it, being a nutcase per se and -not- making Orli into one too! LOL
I wanted to give a glimpse of his (as I think of it) deep, philosophic side that he perhaps don´t reflect much over yet here. I also imagine this side of him, being a sort of sanctuary later on - a way to resque himself with, in what would come into his life through this huge experience.
Thankyou so much for reading and for feedback on this Angsty!PieceOfWriting
This was really quite absorbing, the whole dissection of a random interior moment. It's funny how one reader can take away things that another might not, that even the author might not have intended. For me, this was an absorbing reveal of a exhausted, novice Orli, as bewildered by his good fortune as by the rigors of the film. I particularly enjoyed his take on the parts of his body checking in, the brief surrender to fatigue. We're so accustomed to the exuberant Orlando; this version was a refreshing departure.
*draws heart* I´m relieved you enjoyed Orlis 5 minutes down-the-rabbit-hole, becaused I really feared this was going to come out plain weird or something.. =) I´m happy that my Orli is understood! *nods* And that you like the way it´s done. *blushes at "surreal and abstract"*
I´m afraid those_12_stories are going to kill me =) I´m completely exhausted after only two! LOL
Aww.. *you made me do it* =P it was quite confusing this one but I do like this Orli-version, he´s there-not there; all contemplative in a surprised way.
Thanks for reading and of course the help along with this piece.
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I wanted to give a glimpse of his (as I think of it) deep, philosophic side that he perhaps don´t reflect much over yet here. I also imagine this side of him, being a sort of sanctuary later on - a way to resque himself with, in what would come into his life through this huge experience.
Thankyou so much for reading and for feedback on this Angsty!PieceOfWriting
*headdesk*
Hugs!!
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Well done!
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Oh.Thank.YOU for reading it! And for finding it lovely!!*hyperventilates*
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*squiggles and squees*
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I´m relieved you enjoyed Orlis 5 minutes down-the-rabbit-hole, becaused I really feared this was going to come out plain weird or something.. =) I´m happy that my Orli is understood! *nods*
And that you like the way it´s done. *blushes at "surreal and abstract"*
I´m afraid those_12_stories are going to kill me =) I´m completely exhausted after only two! LOL
*gets squiggle-addicted*
*going squigglish & squeeish*
Thanks, honeybun - for reading and squiggling..
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Orlando seems a little scattered but this is a whole new world to him and very intense and confusing.
Good luck with the other stories!
Oh and thanks for the boy-choir, they are excellent! ;)
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it was quite confusing this one but I do like this Orli-version, he´s there-not there; all contemplative in a surprised way.
Thanks for reading and of course the help along with this piece.
*sings along with your too_hot-choir*
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