Fair Love [1/1]

[illoveminho]

Title: Fair Love [1/1]

Genre: Romance, Fluff, Comedy

Pairing: JongKey, pinch of!2Min

Rating: PG-13

Word-count: 4,568 words (not counting the A/N’s)

Disclaimer: I was going to kidnap Jonghyun but then of course, the Almighty Key had to find out somehow (tattletale Taemin-ah) and we got into a bitch fight. SM should censor those damn lips and voice.

Comments

[pandragonriyong]

SO SWEET, WHAT THE HELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL. I WANT TO KISS YOU FOR MAKING ME GRIN LIKE A MORON. And I want to kiss Dubu for looking for chicken and not being able to throw his sangtae onto the couples during their sweet moments :B

I LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

♥♥♥

[illoveminho]

Bahahahahaha!

Unnie, you finally read one of my fics huh?
Lol^^^
Onew can be cute sometimes..CAN.

Iloveyou back?.....-hugsyoutight-

♥~

[pandragonriyong]

I. AM. SORRY. m(_ _)m
I WAS TOO BUSY AND STUFF AND JDKHSFKDJSLAJHJDSKL CRY ;A;

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YES PLEASE? :B /hugs back

♥

[illoveminho]

Its okay baby!
Lol-hugsyoutight-
Don't cryy(:

♥~

[zarajuku]

SPOT!!!!
I'll be right back baby <3

[illoveminho]

Take your time hubby(:

♥~

[zarajuku]

omg BB!!! I can't believe you dedicated this amazing fic for me! :O *tears of joy*
And seriously, I have a loooong list of things I love in this fic! Everything was so damn good and funny and perfect!! <3

Lol first up, Jjong sleeps untill 5.30 PM?? xD haha!
And Onew bribes Key with clothes? Smart Onew! And Jonghyun is such a big baby!

“Do you know who I am?! I am Jonghyun! BLING-BLING JONGHYUN!!” LOL !!!!!!

Aaaaah!!! I LOVE THIS SO FREAKING MUCH!! The TaeKEy mom/son moments, childish Jjong, Chicken maniac Onew, tha always composed and cool Minho, the little 2min moment and THE FREAKING PRICELESS DIVA KEY ! <3<3 And of course the best of all, the JONGKEY <3<3<3 I'm so happy that you dedicated this to me bb <3
LOVE YOU!!! <3

[illoveminho]

LONG COMMENT.
You couldve atleast warned me yeobo.
Yeahhhh.
This is the longest fic I've ever written in my life in one update.
Im proud of myself! -pats self on back-

Im glad that your happy I dedicated this to you♥

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥~~~~~~~~~

[melalocket]

LOL at ONEW!!!!!
aahahahahahahah >w<

btw i really LOVE this and jjong is sooo hyper!!!!

“Carry me?” Jonghyun pouted and used his oh-so adorable, most famous, signature puppy eyes and of course, being the soft person that Minho is, gave in. Jonghyun jumped up and down clapping his hands like a little kid, adding a little squeal. “Jonghyun,” Onew hissed. “Stop it! People are looking at us weird.” Jonghyun stopped. “So. Let them look. I'm adorable. No pictures please. This is a private night out for us boys. Thanks.” He said, directed to the crowd, who now was officially crept out.

ahahahahahahaa >w<
he is sooo hyper!!!!

[illoveminho]

Kyyyaa~
Unnie, thank you so much!
Means a lot...really.

♥~

[joycekeewy]

I liked it. SO many cute scenes, an the plot is good.
But it seemed a bit rushed. Like all of the sudden nicknames, out of nowhere Key think he loves him while all he had been was pissed about Jjong. And hmm why was Jonghyun dreaming about Key or someone like him when he had not met him yet ? And I'll love you to death only after seeing each other for a day and Key was pissed by Jonghyun for half of said day and Jjong catches him before he falls and then he loves him for life.
It seems too rushed for me. But well, it's fiction isn't it ? And many scenes were very cute & funny so it's ok :P

[illoveminho]

Actually, to tell you the truth, I was kind of rushing this because Im too impatient when it comes to writing long ass oneshots. Lol.
I read it over and I was thinkinhg of deleting it kekeke(:

Thanks for the constructive criticism unnie~
Saranghae~

♥~