Um. More porn.

[illiterate]

Now that I've written this, I realize that it's almost a squick for me. However, Pyro/Magneto remains my current OTP of doom.

Unedited, so if there are any garish errors please let me know. And now I give you: Pyro/Magento, with a slew of other pairings thrown in. Reviews most kindly appreciated.

Comments

[angelislington]

You're my first X-Men slash. Be proud. ;-)

I love the opening paragraph. Seduced indeed...*grins*

[illiterate]

Whee! Nevvie read my slash. -hugs-
Am lusting after your icon.

[anothersuperboy]

Perfect. Just. Perfect. <3!

[illiterate]

Thank you! -hugs- You honestly liked it?

[anothersuperboy]

Yes! I love the way your wrote the Pyro/Magneto dynamic.

[gaski]

One tiny nitpick “You’re real name is Erik, right?” He blurted. because you wanted to know about the errors.

Other than that I'm just not sure what to say. It was lovely, but in an icky way. Mainly because I see Ian McKellen as being old enough to be my grandfather, and that just isn't... Well, you know.
But still, I read it all, and I enjoyed it, so that must mean something:> I'm taking it to mean that it's good, and muchly so:>

[illiterate]

Thank you very much. That is probably the greatest compliment you could have paid me. I have to admit, I know exactly what you mean. I'm not sure if I should have added the sexual element, it might be more accurately portrayed as a seduction of the mind.

<33

[illiterate]

You make me so happy. So damn happy. And I am so thrilled x 100 that you liked my characterization. You get the "amazing person of the day" award. Yup.

[adrienneherbst]

Oh, jeez. Stuff a sock in me before I try to deconstruct this because this. story. is. perfect. And beautifully, hauntingly written, and, yeah, rather squicky, but that's kind of the point, isn't it? Guh. Just. This rocks me so hard.

Magneto shrugged from above him. “Partially,� he said. “But also because you are powerful, and because together…�

“We could be great,� John finished. That kind of says it all, although not really, because what's so great about this story is the characterizations-- /beautiful/, and completely spot on. John and Magneto work together because one is what the other is not, although it's a bizarre, dark complementing, because while Erik and Charles complement each other in that "making the other person whole" way, John and Erik fill in each other's bad spots. John is such, /such/ the callow youth-- "he did not like it very much" for the wine, my god, he just has no, no idea what he's getting into at all

[illiterate]

How do I respond.... I am so flattered that you took the time to comment at length. And I'm insanely glad that you took that much away from this piece and that you basically took it exactly as I did. Thank you so much. Thank you x 100. Just gah! You've made me really happy!! <33