Oh God - I started telling you which bits I thought were incredible and found I was just copypasting all the way through. Sherlock made to be under the influence? Oh yes, especially the way you have him here.
"break all that’s left of those tight tendrils of control he had so long ago wrapped around his mind."
This is simply beautiful. The imagery is gorgeously dream-like, yet, I can see it all happening so gracefully, as graceful as is the writing itself. I want linger in it, watch it happen again and again, sway and turn, and wish that this one will never leave.
(May I beg you to cross-post this to shbbc_quickfix? The comm NEEDS this.)
I don't know where that last line from, usually I'm not very angsty, but my Sherlockian muse demanded it. I'm sure John has other ideas though anyway ;)
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"break all that’s left of those tight tendrils of control he had so long ago wrapped around his mind."
*thud* That's me dead of the awesome.
And then you go break my heart with the end.
I love you. I love this, That is all.
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Thank you for such a gorgeous review, I can safely say you just made my day!
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(May I beg you to cross-post this to shbbc_quickfix? The comm NEEDS this.)
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(I'd love to! No begging required :) Also, your icon is oddly fitting to this fic lol)
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I don't know where that last line from, usually I'm not very angsty, but my Sherlockian muse demanded it. I'm sure John has other ideas though anyway ;)
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I just love the poetic lines ;_;
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