The accident scene was done brilliantly. Although I knew that there'd be an accident, you tricked me into thinking that maybe it wasn't happening yet, with the relief of knowing that Kate is alive and conscious, and than the 'real' accident. It was a very unexpected twist and played like a movie.
I also really liked the image of Zac sausaged up in blankets - (what is it with Zac in bed? In our stories we both imagine him in the same way - i.e., as you defined him, 'a human burrito'." Somehow it seems so accurate for him!
I really liked the possible hint that Isaac and Taylor are somehow enabling Zac's bad habits - possibly because they are worried about opening the can of worms of his dependency. Or also because, well, it's probably easier to do that. And we can't judge them because they must have had a tough ride too - especially Taylor, who has taken Zac's son in as his own.
"My brothers often gave me rides to pharmacies around the area but if they knew my schemes, they hadn’t yet confronted me about that either. "
Anyway, I'm really enjoying this and I hope you'll carry on. Which doesn't mean you're not going to carry on with The Breeders too, right? ;)
I also really liked the image of Zac sausaged up in blankets - (what is it with Zac in bed? In our stories we both imagine him in the same way - i.e., as you defined him, 'a human burrito'." Somehow it seems so accurate for him!
I really liked the possible hint that Isaac and Taylor are somehow enabling Zac's bad habits - possibly because they are worried about opening the can of worms of his dependency. Or also because, well, it's probably easier to do that. And we can't judge them because they must have had a tough ride too - especially Taylor, who has taken Zac's son in as his own.
"My brothers often gave me rides to pharmacies around the area but if they knew my schemes, they hadn’t yet confronted me about that either. "
Anyway, I'm really enjoying this and I hope you'll carry on. Which doesn't mean you're not going to carry on with The Breeders too, right? ;)
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