Well, sense did need to be knocked into him somehow. Ironically, Caleb came through for us this time. Who knows what he'll do next though. So unreliable... ; )
So i left a Review for chapter 16 but I decided to repeat it here because I thought I might have a better chance at a response.
"That was great. Such a long chapter. There is one thing I'm a little confused about. Maybe its just me though. The meeting between Caleb and Drake, what exactly came out of that? Did Caleb like Christian? Was he just confused? Was he jealous of their connection? I find the conversation, Caleb's answers combined with Drake's thoughts to be somewhat confusing. :) Maybe you weren't going for crystal clear though. I really like this story, even if it is heart-breaking."
I feel somewhat daft because no one else seems to have the problems I have. But I figured I could at least ask, 'cause otherwise its going to be driving me nuts. I have a tendency to read too much into things. Thanks. And grrreat story. :-)
Ok, so here's a tough one to explain. All you really needed to have picked up from the meeting with Caleb and Drake was that Drake now knows that Christian was never a willing participant in the kiss he and Caleb shared. It was very one-sided. As for the confusion, I wrote it like that for a reason. Caleb has never been one to be able to articulate himself well. And now that he thinks he's losing his best friend, well, the combination of emotions is making his head spin. Truly, the conservation was life and its confusion at its best (or worst). Don't feel daft!! We'll be happy to answer any other questions you may have, as long as they don't reveal the end of the story! Thanks for leaving a comment (and a lovely review).
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"That was great. Such a long chapter. There is one thing I'm a little confused about. Maybe its just me though. The meeting between Caleb and Drake, what exactly came out of that? Did Caleb like Christian? Was he just confused? Was he jealous of their connection? I find the conversation, Caleb's answers combined with Drake's thoughts to be somewhat confusing. :) Maybe you weren't going for crystal clear though. I really like this story, even if it is heart-breaking."
I feel somewhat daft because no one else seems to have the problems I have. But I figured I could at least ask, 'cause otherwise its going to be driving me nuts. I have a tendency to read too much into things. Thanks. And grrreat story. :-)
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