my poem - lonely tear

[ikrrrb]

I wrote this poem awhile ago and reading it again makes me want to write more heh...but tell me what you think...

I wipe the loney tear from my face
As the next tear pours out
Sliding down my soft cheeks
and to the floor

I look all around and I see
the other people around me
They too have the lonely tear
falling to the floor

I slide down the corner of the walls
Shaken up from all the pain that I've suffered
Closing myself in from the world
And I don't want to come back out

All it took was a helping hand
From a man with a passion of love
To bring me back on my feet
And to stand again once more

Even though I still stand
The tears still remain,
And as I look at the man
He too has a lonely tear

He looks at me in confusion
As he wipes the tear from my eye
And I wipe the tear from his
And we both begin to smile

That's what friends are for
To wipe each others' tears
To wash away each others' sorrow
And to learn what it feels to be loved