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They're on opposite sides of the door. It's dark but it's early and Daesung and Yongbae and Seunghyun senior are out doing something actually not work-related for once in their lives. Seungri and Jiyong are home and what they're doing doesn't really have to do with work either.
What they're doing is sitting with their back's to the thin wood ( Read more... )
Then I position my fingers on the keyboard but... I spent an entire minute (maybe more) just staring at the keys and not typing anything. Words just escaped me.
After that I stand up and decided I needed to go to the bathroom. I spent some good 5 minutes or so there just spacing out and looking at the mirror.
After that I open Pingus (my fave Linux game) and try to save penguins from dying.
Then I open my browser again and try to reply for the second time.
JKSKLASKASKYJSAHJKHDJHJHDJDSJHJSJSHAHAAJSJASAHSHAJHSASS
THIS IS SO DAMN FUCKING HOTNESS OVERLOADED WITH SMUT AND SWEETNESS AND DAMN YOU WHY ARE YOU SO MUCH WIN?
The many reasons why oxygenlove is marrying this Fic/Drabble/OmghfgGRIpwnsallStory:
1. Ji and Ri are so fucking real. I've read a lot of fics that I love mainly because the author kept the members' personality intact throughout the whole fic and this is by far, on of the best. It's in my top 3 list of MOST IN-CHARACTER GRI FICS!
2. I totally like how Ji is just so in command here, and then lost, and then leading, and then being lead, and then being distracted, turned to mush by Ri, then desperate, then cute.
3. I am inlove with Ri, he's hesitant as always, then becoming surer and bolder because he knows it's futile to wrestle with need and want.
4. THE FUCKING 'AGAINST THE DOOR SMUT'!!!! DAMN YOU. This totally nearly killed me. It was so sweet and cute and really really hot as hell. How do you do that? The touching, the visuals, the moaning... WORDS ARE POWERFUL!They can kill. They killed me here. *dies*
5. The unmentioned "he thinks he hears something else, but surely he's mistaken, because Seungri, could never, would never, say that." WHAT THE HELL DID RI SAY?
6. The breaking down of resolve and just fucking openning the door. That was win.
7. The day I wrote this is seriously one of the luckiest day of my life:
But really, I have this image in my head of this scene happening (I almost wrote it in but I stopped like I always do cause I seriously seriously cannot write smut. Honest. Scout's honor. Okay, so I never was a scout but.).
So they're all..
"hyung.. augh hyung"
"Seung- seungri...ri"
On opposite sides of the door. haha.
And then the day you replied:
I am writing smut for you. Full on smut. SUCK IT.
is one of my happiest.
And when you said this:
I wrote this horrible, terrible no good VERY DIRTY smut!fic on my journal, go check it out! I'm only posting it so you can read it, i'm not actually going to post it as a fic because it's total crap. unless I find a good beta. (like you?)
IS THE DAY I TASTED HEAVEN.
okay, I'm getting really emotional here.
BUT MY POINT IS ILOVEYOULETSGETMARRIEDANDMOVETOVEGAS.
Anyway...
This fic is the bomb. I'm in love with it.
*marries it instead of you*
I'M MEMMING THIS BECAUSE IT'S KSAJKJAKJKASJSKS!!!!!!!!
Oh and yesh, beta!
I suck at beta-ing!
But if you are relly really in desperate need... I'll try to help *gets into helping stance* :)
BUT PLEASE also try to look for a great beta-er, like raid_kun whom i love like you~
and yeah, have i told you this is like... EPIC WIN?
cause it is.
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@1: Thanks, Ji is so hard for me, as I'm sure you can tell. I like to think I've improved a bit from my first fics after I got my brain around the whole G-ri relationship. I think your fics helped a lot, btw. XD I still haven't read Songs 5, but I'll get right on that. :O
@3: Ri I tend to make ghei/pathetic and/or angry, so I made him a little cuter here.
@4: YAH I KNO RITE! I really did not intend to write this, I dunno....
@5: GUESS LOL.
@6: I know. I debated for a bit whether or not to keep that in the end, because it kinda screws them over, but I just really wanted to. And I guess they wanted to, lol.
@7: You are a wonderful dork, also amazing. hahahahaha I can't believe you quoted all that.
In the end, thank you. I might actually post it since you seem to like it. I'll check with Raid-kun for beta-ing. <3
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But I feel like a bitch after betaing fics. Because I'm really bad with tact. D:
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but you really are good. and you without tact is effing cuteness overload!!!!!
augh...
hope you don't kill meh.
<3
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you are freaking talented you you you!!!!
i could never write something this good when i'm sane!
this is freaking love <3
@1 Ji's really hard for me too! His mind just works really differently from normal people. *shakes head* He's a tough kid. OMGH *is honored* thankyouverykamsa... i tried to show the gri relatioship in my fics and glad you picked something up from those attempts at greatness..!
@3 YOU WRITE CUTE!RI RELLY EFFING WELL! Augh. Ri was just being oh so fucking cute all through out and it's just the right amout of cuteness!!! gah gah gah
@4 the "against opposite sides of the door sex" was the highlkight man YOU WIN IN LIFE!!!!
@5 "i love you" or "fuck me" "hyung, come inside now."
@6 YESH THEY WANTED TO!!!!! WRITE WHAT YOUR CHARACTERS WANT TO DO!!!! Next, they want to fuck in the waiting room of MNET or KBS or SBS or MBC after performing. They have a quickie, with Ji leaning over the dresser and Ri seeing Ji's face while he fucks his hyung. PUAHAHHHAAA.
@7 i can't believe myself either. o__o
SEEM TO LIKE IT????
THAT SENTENCE SERIOUSLY HAVE A SHOT FOR BIGGEST UNDERSTATEMENT OF THE CENTURY!
DUH, I AM HERE, READY TO MARRY IT AND YOU SAY I 'SEEM TO LIKE IT'?????
okay i'll stfu now.
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