House fic: When Everything Will Be Just Fine

[ijemanja]

Woo! Done! *cough*

Title: When Everything Will Be Just Fine
Pairing: Cameron/Thirteen
Rating: R
Words: 6001
Notes: My quite late housefemslash fic, written for fourteencats. Set following the season four finale.
Summary: Cameron cares. Thirteen tries not to. Hijinks ensue.

Comments

[perfect_pride]

That was fantastically written. Your characterisation was great; and Thirteen's reaction to the Huntington's was so believable. I also like the fact that you involved other characters, it made the fic all the more realistic!
Great job. <3.

[fourteencats]

OH MY GOD. I AM SO HAPPY THIS FIC IS FOR ME. Excellent take on my quote... I could not have possibly done this better in a million years.

The most daunting part of your talent is characterization. By daunting, I mean it was extraordinary to the point of being scary to me. :) You nailed every character, which is saying something, and every instance where a character was involved had a purpose, which is saying something more. Your Thirteen was especially brilliant. Most writers spin her as bitterly sarcastic or freakishly unemotional. You struck the right balance between her ability to hide herself and her determination to not slip between the cracks as one in six billion.

Guh. My comment isn't getting any better than this, given that my brain is melted. All I can say is I'm honestly sad that the ficathon is over. This makes me want to throw prompts at you and reap the well-written benefits. :) A sincere thanks for this wonderful fic.

[hivesix]

What a brilliant read! I thought everything was as perfect as could be - dialogue, pace, characterisation. Love it.

[mysensitiveside]

Wow, this was really fantastic! Like everyone else said, everyone was wonderfully in-character. Great job with the being-in-denial theme, too.

Loved it! :)

[kennedyismyhero]

Awesome. Can't say much more than that. One of the best 13/Cameron stories that didn't get too mushy. :D