#011; mummifiedmutant

[niles]

Title: Identify.
Prompt:
--- 10pastryhearts; CHALLENGE #6: PATTERNS.
--- 10pastryhearts; O T H E R S I D E -- CHOUX PASTRY HEART.
Fandom: Kingdom Hearts.
Characters: Naminé, Marluxia, Larxene; mentions: Kairi, Xemnas, Sora.
Word Count: 476.
Rating: PG.
Author's Notes: See? Something with Larxene in it >:D Not too proud of my first entry to the current challenge over at 10pastryhearts so I

Comments

[euphonious_glow]

Marluxia being the one to name her... Interesting.

Nice idea for the challenge.

[niles]

I thought it'd be interesting, too. And some kind of logic in my head said Xemnas, of all people, wouldn't name a humanoid nobody 'Naminé' :)

Thanks!

[dreamer1789]

Beautiful! Makes me want to hug Naminé. ^^

[niles]

Thank you x)

[hotasphyxiation]

This is really great... I love the idea of her senses intermixing with color (there's some big name for that, I swear), and your portrayal of Marluxia is really nice here- ambitious, charming, sharp.

Loved the last two lines, too. Very nice! :)