ETA: Oh my. The pronunciation of all the names--stations and people all--is beautiful. OH MACEY. ♥♥♥♥♥♥ (Ryou rhymes with "owe", but other than that, it was BEAUTIFUL.)
I love your voice, it's so nice going through the story.
One thing, it sounds a bit like it got cut off towards the end, D:, I know it's not just the way it came out. I dunno what could fix it maybe something like the end to signify that's it for the reader?
Great job!
(Qem-chibati anon because otherwise she'll end up getting into trouble)
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ETA: Oh my. The pronunciation of all the names--stations and people all--is beautiful. OH MACEY. ♥♥♥♥♥♥ (Ryou rhymes with "owe", but other than that, it was BEAUTIFUL.)
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I love your voice, it's so nice going through the story.
One thing, it sounds a bit like it got cut off towards the end, D:, I know it's not just the way it came out. I dunno what could fix it maybe something like the end to signify that's it for the reader?
Great job!
(Qem-chibati anon because otherwise she'll end up getting into trouble)
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