Okay I know I already said this, but do you remember how I said the last chapter was my favorite? I lied it's totally this scene right here.
There is just something completely hot about Chloe getting to see Oliver become Green Arrow for the first time. It's like She's watching a legend in the making. Oy. And that just ups the hotness factor.
This scene is amazing, no lie. I can practically feel the anxiety coming off of Chloe and the uncertainty, but at the same time the want and need to believe that he's changed and that he wants this. I like the thought of Oliver being all "come in have a drink" basically make yourself at home in my home where you should be all the time *bounces.*
The thing I love about when you write the characters thought process is how we learn so much more about the AU world you've created. About what their personalities are like and what is and isn't normal for them. I mean don't get me wrong I love dialogue LMAO especially snarky or sweet Chlollie, but I think it's awesome how you fill the reader in on so much without making it overwhelming or too wordy, you know what I mean?
I love Oliver here too because it isn't often in this universe you get to really see him being self-conscious or unsure of himself so I like that we get a peak of that here. I like that Chloe makes him nervous. She's a person who sees through his BS and he knows that so it's always like...what's Chloe gonna think? LOL
I love how he's opening up more and he wants to know what she thinks and he just wants to be and do something worthwhile. *happy sigh* Oh Chlollie.
LMFAO Lois and Clark are secretly knocking boots!!! I'm not sure that there is anything better in the world than that. LOL I seriously love this! It was awesome! I love it starts off all hey what are doing here and then just pops right into them going at it Haha Oh Clois.
This has to seriously be one of the best Clois scenes ever, thought I keep saying that for this story so it's possible they will all be the best Clois scenes ever haha. I love that for once they are the ones hiding a relationship since it's always Chlollie. It's a nice change. Seriously just too perfect for words. Have a mentioned I really love Clark in this story?
Dude, of course Chlollie knows, who can keep a secret from them? LMAO They are the master of secrets. It's awesome and yea so not subtle at all HAHA. I seriously love the way Lois and Clark bicker here I'm telling you I've always liked Clois, but you make me LOVE them.
Aww Ollie loves you Chloe! Notice him notice him! Yes I know she notices him but let him know you notice him LMAO This is great, M.
I'm loving the progress between Chloe and Oliver. It's not too fast where it feels like you're rushing things, but it's also not too slow where I want to take hold of your neck and strangle it.
The last scene is awesome Mandy, no lie. I love that Chloe noticed he skipped lunch and that he was in there all day. She brought him dinner! I love their conversation and how at first they settle in nicely mocking Clois (so much love) and OMG I died when he mentioned how close the other version of them were. That's so Chloe to blush and get all embarrassed.
I felt bad for Ollie when she was talking about slapping the other version of him and even though that hurt I'm glad he understood. He was technically married to Tess and that was before he made this huge change in his life and they started to get closer.
You can tell they're really trying to understand each other better and not make snap judgements or assume stuff and I really love that. This entire chapter was made of win. ♥
Cori, if I didn't know better, I'd say that you have some feelings for this story. LMAO. I ♥ you. Thank you so much for all the lovely compliments. :)
Chloe definitely needed to be the first one to see Ollie in all his glory. *smirks* Glad you enjoyed Ollie too and the little bit of nerves he's got happening.
It means a lot that you're enjoying Clois so much. I miss them lately so I like writing this AU version and I don't want to take away from Chlollie, but I want them to have their little side story too. And yeah, Chlollie is totally onto them.
As always, I'm happy that you're not going to attempt to murder me over the pacing. Hahaha. Poor Ollie. He keeps getting slapped back (pun totally intended) but no worries...he's going to start getting more aggressive in his pursuit very soon.
Again, thank you so much. I'm happy you love this as much as you do. ♥
There is just something completely hot about Chloe getting to see Oliver become Green Arrow for the first time. It's like She's watching a legend in the making. Oy. And that just ups the hotness factor.
This scene is amazing, no lie. I can practically feel the anxiety coming off of Chloe and the uncertainty, but at the same time the want and need to believe that he's changed and that he wants this. I like the thought of Oliver being all "come in have a drink" basically make yourself at home in my home where you should be all the time *bounces.*
The thing I love about when you write the characters thought process is how we learn so much more about the AU world you've created. About what their personalities are like and what is and isn't normal for them. I mean don't get me wrong I love dialogue LMAO especially snarky or sweet Chlollie, but I think it's awesome how you fill the reader in on so much without making it overwhelming or too wordy, you know what I mean?
I love Oliver here too because it isn't often in this universe you get to really see him being self-conscious or unsure of himself so I like that we get a peak of that here. I like that Chloe makes him nervous. She's a person who sees through his BS and he knows that so it's always like...what's Chloe gonna think? LOL
I love how he's opening up more and he wants to know what she thinks and he just wants to be and do something worthwhile. *happy sigh* Oh Chlollie.
LMFAO Lois and Clark are secretly knocking boots!!! I'm not sure that there is anything better in the world than that. LOL I seriously love this! It was awesome! I love it starts off all hey what are doing here and then just pops right into them going at it Haha Oh Clois.
This has to seriously be one of the best Clois scenes ever, thought I keep saying that for this story so it's possible they will all be the best Clois scenes ever haha. I love that for once they are the ones hiding a relationship since it's always Chlollie. It's a nice change. Seriously just too perfect for words. Have a mentioned I really love Clark in this story?
Dude, of course Chlollie knows, who can keep a secret from them? LMAO They are the master of secrets. It's awesome and yea so not subtle at all HAHA. I seriously love the way Lois and Clark bicker here I'm telling you I've always liked Clois, but you make me LOVE them.
Aww Ollie loves you Chloe! Notice him notice him! Yes I know she notices him but let him know you notice him LMAO This is great, M.
I'm loving the progress between Chloe and Oliver. It's not too fast where it feels like you're rushing things, but it's also not too slow where I want to take hold of your neck and strangle it.
The last scene is awesome Mandy, no lie. I love that Chloe noticed he skipped lunch and that he was in there all day. She brought him dinner! I love their conversation and how at first they settle in nicely mocking Clois (so much love) and OMG I died when he mentioned how close the other version of them were. That's so Chloe to blush and get all embarrassed.
I felt bad for Ollie when she was talking about slapping the other version of him and even though that hurt I'm glad he understood. He was technically married to Tess and that was before he made this huge change in his life and they started to get closer.
You can tell they're really trying to understand each other better and not make snap judgements or assume stuff and I really love that. This entire chapter was made of win. ♥
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Chloe definitely needed to be the first one to see Ollie in all his glory. *smirks* Glad you enjoyed Ollie too and the little bit of nerves he's got happening.
It means a lot that you're enjoying Clois so much. I miss them lately so I like writing this AU version and I don't want to take away from Chlollie, but I want them to have their little side story too. And yeah, Chlollie is totally onto them.
As always, I'm happy that you're not going to attempt to murder me over the pacing. Hahaha. Poor Ollie. He keeps getting slapped back (pun totally intended) but no worries...he's going to start getting more aggressive in his pursuit very soon.
Again, thank you so much. I'm happy you love this as much as you do. ♥
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