*giggles* *snorts* JKJKJKJK I could never hate you I don't actually think it's in me LOL. Though I'm quite angry with you *glares*
"Chloe was trying not to dwell on it or worry, but that was proving impossible. Logically, she knew that if they were in danger or needed extra help, Oliver would have called her, or more likely Clark. It was probably just a standard 33.1 mission and the team was busy. She understood that. There were times over the years when she’d been helping Clark with something or working on a complicated story and she’d gone days at a time without eating anything other than coffee and the occasional muffin. It wasn’t a big deal that Oliver hadn’t stopped what he was doing to call her and let her know what was going on. Except it was a big deal to her and that was the problem." <=== This is whole part right here is just so Chloe it's like rationally she gets she can't blame him or be upset that's there's been no contact by her heart is like crying for Ollie! *sniffles*
And Chloe putting everyone before herself knowing that the world needs GA and willing to sacrifice her happiness is also so Chloe. You're really spot on with her in this. I'm right there with her chest tight and everything :(
*cries hysterically* When she opened the door and he was there and she's all...and he's all hello gorgeous and her throat got all tight and the lump and OMG Mandy!!!! Why do you hate me D: *takes a deep breath* Sorry...
Lois as usual was perfect and I swear whenever she speaks to Oliver I smirk. I LOVE your Lois to death. No joke. Best Lois ever.
Smut...you're smut is always hot and this was no exception, but it was so much more...I felt like...all this emotion was there welling up over the edge and bubbling over and the smut made me tear up...I just...it felt like goodbye sex *cries hysterically*
" “No reason for me to keep coming back,” Oliver repeated her words slowly and it hit him that she still didn’t realize how much she meant to him. He moved toward her, taking a seat on the table in front of her and reached for her hands. “Chloe, you’re my reason. I want to be with you and I know despite what you’re trying to do right now that you want to be with me too.”" <==== THIS THIS THIS *cries harder*
....I'm pretty sure if I quotes everything I loved about that last scene and how in character they were and how perfect it was the entire scene would be repated back here. The whole chapter was great but this scene...it took the cake. It was raw and real and I'm pretty sure I just died a little inside...now I need to go back to our other document and die more inside... *CRIES HYSTERICALLY* D: D: D: D: D:
You're kind of mean. But I already knew that about you, so it's all good.
Thanks, Cori! I'm really glad you enjoyed this chapter even if I did sort of rip your heart out and stomp on it a little. I'm really happy you felt Chloe's reactions were on the money. Hmm, I feel like you may be channeling Ollie with some of your drama here. Hahahaa.
Aw, thank you for the Lois compliments. I appreciate that because you know how much I love her. Plus she'd probably take a bat to my head in my sleep if I screwed her up. ;)
Hee! Thanks. Wsriting smut is usually hard for me, but for some reason this just flowed. *nods* It was good-bye sex for her. Poor Ollie thought he was showing her how much he loved her. Oh, Chloe.
*hugs you* Thanks for the comments and even the mean words. It'll get better...eventually.
*giggles* *snorts* JKJKJKJK I could never hate you I don't actually think it's in me LOL. Though I'm quite angry with you *glares*
"Chloe was trying not to dwell on it or worry, but that was proving impossible. Logically, she knew that if they were in danger or needed extra help, Oliver would have called her, or more likely Clark. It was probably just a standard 33.1 mission and the team was busy. She understood that. There were times over the years when she’d been helping Clark with something or working on a complicated story and she’d gone days at a time without eating anything other than coffee and the occasional muffin. It wasn’t a big deal that Oliver hadn’t stopped what he was doing to call her and let her know what was going on. Except it was a big deal to her and that was the problem." <=== This is whole part right here is just so Chloe it's like rationally she gets she can't blame him or be upset that's there's been no contact by her heart is like crying for Ollie! *sniffles*
And Chloe putting everyone before herself knowing that the world needs GA and willing to sacrifice her happiness is also so Chloe. You're really spot on with her in this. I'm right there with her chest tight and everything :(
*cries hysterically* When she opened the door and he was there and she's all...and he's all hello gorgeous and her throat got all tight and the lump and OMG Mandy!!!! Why do you hate me D: *takes a deep breath* Sorry...
Lois as usual was perfect and I swear whenever she speaks to Oliver I smirk. I LOVE your Lois to death. No joke. Best Lois ever.
Smut...you're smut is always hot and this was no exception, but it was so much more...I felt like...all this emotion was there welling up over the edge and bubbling over and the smut made me tear up...I just...it felt like goodbye sex *cries hysterically*
" “No reason for me to keep coming back,” Oliver repeated her words slowly and it hit him that she still didn’t realize how much she meant to him. He moved toward her, taking a seat on the table in front of her and reached for her hands. “Chloe, you’re my reason. I want to be with you and I know despite what you’re trying to do right now that you want to be with me too.”" <==== THIS THIS THIS *cries harder*
....I'm pretty sure if I quotes everything I loved about that last scene and how in character they were and how perfect it was the entire scene would be repated back here. The whole chapter was great but this scene...it took the cake. It was raw and real and I'm pretty sure I just died a little inside...now I need to go back to our other document and die more inside... *CRIES HYSTERICALLY* D: D: D: D: D:
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Thanks, Cori! I'm really glad you enjoyed this chapter even if I did sort of rip your heart out and stomp on it a little. I'm really happy you felt Chloe's reactions were on the money. Hmm, I feel like you may be channeling Ollie with some of your drama here. Hahahaa.
Aw, thank you for the Lois compliments. I appreciate that because you know how much I love her. Plus she'd probably take a bat to my head in my sleep if I screwed her up. ;)
Hee! Thanks. Wsriting smut is usually hard for me, but for some reason this just flowed. *nods* It was good-bye sex for her. Poor Ollie thought he was showing her how much he loved her. Oh, Chloe.
*hugs you* Thanks for the comments and even the mean words. It'll get better...eventually.
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