here's a poem!

[iheartcowboys22]

hey so here is a poem i wrote and i want constructive critism.. this time... os that's it.. so bye!

~Remember When~

Remember when we talked all night

Remember when we laughed all day

I remember

Remember when we were so young

Remember when we didn’t know true love

I remember

Remember when all we did was hang out

Remember when I cried in your arms

I remember

Remember when we hugged

Remember when I never wanted t o let go

I remember

Remember when I called

Remember what I said

I remember

Remember when we just hung out as friends

Remember when I walked away

I remember

Remember the phone conversations we had

Remember the arguments

I remember

Remember when I failed

Remember when you failed

I remember

Remember the last day

Remember the first day

I remember

Remember when we made a vow

Remember what you said

I remember

Remember when I made the worst mistake in my life

Remember when I walked out of your life

I remember

~Constance Carlson