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igrockspock

Untitled Pike/Number One PWP

Oct 10, 2009 17:35

Title: See above
Author: igrockspock
Pairing: Pike/Number One
Summary: shameless oral sex porn
Rating: NC-17

( he wraps his arm around her hips and pulls her forward until her legs are spread over his face )

!fic: star trek

Comments 25

secretsolitaire October 10 2009, 23:13:48 UTC

Well, guh. *fans herself* The whole thing was hot, and the last paragraph was the cherry on top. ;-)

igrockspock October 14 2009, 03:24:45 UTC

Thank you!

illariy October 11 2009, 00:01:07 UTC

Guh. I've had to fan myself since the line about her riding him on the bedroom floor. OMG! And then it somehow got even better. Guh. Thanks for sharing this. :D

igrockspock October 14 2009, 03:25:01 UTC

Thank you!

rubynye October 11 2009, 03:42:34 UTC

"Since I rode you hard on your bedroom floor." She says the words as matter-of-factly as she might deliver a mission report. That's what makes it so sexy.

Yes, that would be, wouldn't it?

Pike is unrepentant; if she doesn't want him to make her angry, she should make it less fun to piss her off.

I am reminded of someone reminding someone of himself...

And then my brain melted from the stellar-core hotness of this story, or there would be more quotations. But the last paragraph made me absolutely whoop aloud. :D

igrockspock October 14 2009, 03:25:28 UTC

I am reminded of someone reminding someone of himself...

That would be a fun story to write!

taraljc October 11 2009, 04:35:28 UTC

*makes incoherent noises of pure glee*

eta: I think you should share this with the rest of the class, please?

igrockspock October 14 2009, 03:26:51 UTC

Thank you!

(And also thanks for reminding me to add it to the community)

taraljc October 14 2009, 03:28:18 UTC

It's my mission in life to get all the Pike/Number One in one place, in the hopes that people will MAKE MORE OMG.

I have other missions, but this one has taken centre stage of late :)

alder_knight October 11 2009, 07:03:20 UTC

Scrolling down my friends page, I stopped and said, "igrockspock wrote PORN?" (I think of your writing as strictly gen, is all! I vaguely recall a mention of porn-in-progress...)

Nicely detailed, well-paced, and sexy!

igrockspock October 14 2009, 03:27:52 UTC

I guess I haven't written as much porn as I thought I had. Maybe I tend to enjoy it in my head more than I get it down on paper, or maybe it's all embedded in stories that contain actual plots. But I do love writing a good sex scene, so I'm glad you enjoyed this one :)

alder_knight October 14 2009, 07:32:14 UTC

On further consideration, I recall a fic with Gaila in Spock's office that I would consider porn... and I'm sure there's more, too. Commented too soon before, I suppose!