A Picture is Worth 1000 Words: A Multifandom Comment Fic Meme

Jul 11, 2011 12:15

Have you seen a hot photo at Sex is Not the Enemy and you wish there were a fic to go with it? Is there a still from your favorite series that needs a story to accompany it? Do you have a vast stockpile of pictures of outer space that would make amazing back drops for a sci-fi story? Well, this is your place! You're invited to post an ( Read more... )

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De L'Eau, Inception, Ariadne, G yeomanrand July 11 2011, 22:55:32 UTC
Ariadne tries to remember dreaming. Just dreaming, not making the dreamscape form to her whims and her wills -- or, more accurately, her employers' whims and wills.

She can't remember the last time, not even sitting here in her own dream, watching her child-self swim laps in a tidily chlorinated indoor pool. She tries to remember if either Cobb, the elder or the younger, had tried to warn her about not being able to let go control to the soundtrack of the child splashing about. Confused, but not in danger.

At least she doesn't have to worry about her own constructs turning against her, or confusingly inappropriate kisses from Arthur as a defense mechanism. She belongs in her own mind.

She hopes.

She draws in another deep breath, trying to relax, release, to stop rendering, stop building--on any scale at all. She closes her eyes in the dreamscape, tries not to wonder if she's just exiting REM.

A droplet of water catches on her face; another strikes her arm. She opens her eyes, stretching out her arms to feel the water rising up from the pool, striking against her skin of its own volition and none of her design.

She laughs, and laughing, wakes.

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Re: De L'Eau, Inception, Ariadne, G downjune July 12 2011, 15:02:35 UTC
So cool! What a great way to use the image! (And I ♥ Ariadne, too.)

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Re: De L'Eau, Inception, Ariadne, G yeomanrand July 12 2011, 18:00:29 UTC
Thank you!

The water honestly looks as though it's falling upward to me, and I kept trying to figure out a scenario, and then a friend mentioned Inception and -- yes! Ariadne!

:)

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Re: De L'Eau, Inception, Ariadne, G illariy July 12 2011, 19:58:09 UTC
What an imaginative use of the image! I really like how you contrasted her earlier stress and planning-brain with the carefree image of playing with raindrops. :D

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Re: De L'Eau, Inception, Ariadne, G yeomanrand July 13 2011, 02:03:38 UTC
Thank you!

I have a feeling most Architects in Inception have planning-brain hangups. :)

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Re: De L'Eau, Inception, Ariadne, G ceitfianna July 14 2011, 21:58:53 UTC
This makes me want to watch Inception again. It must be such a hole to not be able to dream on your own and I love her reclaiming it and the glorious joy of rain.

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Re: De L'Eau, Inception, Ariadne, G yeomanrand July 14 2011, 23:08:56 UTC
Well, thank you so very much -- and yes, I would think it would be a hole indeed.

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Re: De L'Eau, Inception, Ariadne, G rubynye July 18 2011, 17:29:54 UTC
YES. Yes indeed!

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Re: De L'Eau, Inception, Ariadne, G yeomanrand July 25 2011, 03:01:15 UTC
/me curtseys. :)

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