Texts from Last Night: A Gaila Fic Fest

Aug 03, 2010 10:53

You guys were right! I did do it. Gaila just insisted ( Read more... )

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devilishdestiny August 3 2010, 16:10:14 UTC
dammit, i've never written a fanfic, but these prompts are making me want to!

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igrockspock August 3 2010, 16:11:55 UTC
You should! Gaila wants to have fun! And I started off with commentfic in someone else's journal, and look what happened :)

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yeomanrand August 3 2010, 16:18:15 UTC
14. Today I learned you can't titshake with a corset on.

Depends on the corset. Sometimes the only way to settle them is to shake them.

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igrockspock August 3 2010, 16:31:47 UTC
That sounds like a lovely conversation between Gaila and Uhura...

*hint hint*

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yeomanrand August 3 2010, 16:33:13 UTC
I'm thinking about it, honest. But I've got Colt shouting in the back of my head at the moment, too.

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yeomanrand August 3 2010, 19:53:38 UTC
Written.

Dorky, but written.

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jouissant August 3 2010, 16:19:40 UTC
But how will I ever choose?!

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igrockspock August 3 2010, 16:32:10 UTC
Well, if you're really stuck, you could give me a range of options, and I could pick for you...

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jouissant August 3 2010, 16:38:41 UTC
They're just all so great. But I think I've narrowed it down. Might just have to write more than one.

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igrockspock August 3 2010, 16:43:05 UTC
Gaila and I support this decision.

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25. Every time I get arrested in Maine igrockspock August 3 2010, 16:25:58 UTC
"Gaila, I am so sorry. About the Kobayashi Maru. About everything."

She knows he's sincere because of the way he can't quite meet her eyes. Jim's the opposite of most humans: he looks you in the eyes when he's lying.

"It's okay, Jim. Really."

The newly regenerated skin on her face feels too tight. A few hours ago, it had been a tangled mass of burns.

"No. No, it's really not. You are -- were -- my friend, and I used you to get what I wanted."

"We both use what we have. It's why we understand each other."

She gives him a smile, the lop-sided, mischievous one she always used when she wanted him to break the rules with her. The new skin on her cheeks feels strange, and she wonders if she'd gotten the smile right, whether she looks like her seductive, devious self or a broken girl trying too hard to smile in a corner of medbay. She doesn't wait to find out.

"Jim," she says, and she feels happy even if the smile tugging on the edges of her lips still doesn't quite feel natural. "Let me tell you why it's okay. Every time ( ... )

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Re: 25. Every time I get arrested in Maine jouissant August 3 2010, 16:39:38 UTC
Oh, I love this.

That's the problem with Jim. Sometimes he looks you in the eye when he's not lying.

Of course, a lot of people would say that's the problem with her too.

This is so perfectly them.

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Re: 25. Every time I get arrested in Maine igrockspock August 3 2010, 18:53:16 UTC
Thank you so much!

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Re: 25. Every time I get arrested in Maine mardia August 3 2010, 17:06:46 UTC
Oh, this is a great look at Jim and Gaila, and this line in particular really rang true:

The new skin on her cheeks feels strange, and she wonders if she'd gotten the smile right, whether she looks like her seductive, devious self or a broken girl trying too hard to smile in a corner of medbay. She doesn't wait to find out.

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you could change my world, Gaila/McCoy mardia August 3 2010, 17:04:07 UTC
BEST FIC-FEST EVER.

2. I hope this doesn't become one of those friendships where we don't have sex.

Gaila waits until the right moment to ask. They're studying in McCoy's room instead of the Engineering library like usual, because it gives them privacy, and Leonard's the sort of person who, Gaila thinks, would be more open to these sort of inquiries when done in private.

"Leonard?" Gaila asks. (She's always stuck to his first name because she likes the sound of it, and Jim's nickname for Leonard has always struck her as morbid, no matter how much affection Jim puts into it.) "Are we friends?"

Leonard turns away from the 3-D rendering of a Risan adult female's skeletal system to blink at her in surprise. "Of course we are," he tells her, the response gratifyingly quick and certain.

Gaila smiles at him. She was actually sure of his response--well, of his response to this question anyway, but it's still nice to actually hear. "Good," she says happily, then turns to the important issue at hand. "Are we the sort of friends who can ( ... )

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Re: you could change my world, Gaila/McCoy rubynye August 3 2010, 17:08:18 UTC
Oh, this filled me with DELIGHT. Sheer utter delight!

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Re: you could change my world, Gaila/McCoy mardia August 3 2010, 17:14:00 UTC
Yay, I'm glad to hear it!

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Re: you could change my world, Gaila/McCoy igrockspock August 3 2010, 17:16:47 UTC
This is my absolute favorite rare pair, and I love the way you have written it! It's so much fun, but the last line suggests something deep and true about both of their characters.

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