'Ice' (Superman/Batman, PG)

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Because I'm getting over my unfinished fic/fic languishing on hard drive thing -- or at least, seeking imaginary therapy for this culprit -- and posting. This is from July. Cue the forehead smacking. It's also for lafemmedarla, who originally gave the prompt. Wanted to post this ficlet already, that way I can work on ze other ones. No beta. Mistakes are mine.

Comments

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Thank you for the detailed feedback! :) Nice to know which parts worked. When I first found out about Bruce reading up on it after Kara arrived, I LOVED that idea, and am surprised I haven't seen it more often. Very few people know the language. Bruce is the only human to understand it. Built in squee, I say. The idea of Clark actually detecting if Bruce had an accent or noticing mistakes... heee. I love it.

Thanks re: writing style, by the way. It's been a while since I've written fic so I still need to brush up, but I thought it might work with the freeze... thing. Either that or it's a good excuse? ;)

I liked it here how he's also got the "you annoy me but I like you anyway" thing going on, and it's not just Batman.

Bwah. I like Clark so much for the different interpretations -- nice or firm, but sometimes I like him a little firm and sure of himself, kind of like Destroyer from JLU and his "world made of cardboard" comment. He's been around the block a few times and knows Bruce enough to not be too intimidated by him, but still maintains that sense of humor.