Sherlock shaped joy

[ifreet]

Yes, Sherlock Explosions was very slashy, and yet I wrote het. It's okay to be confused.

Title: Our old room
Fandom: Sherlock Holmes (2009)
Rating: Mature and Explicit
Warning: Bondage
Pairing: Adler/Holmes
Notes: Thanks to dessert_first and sisterofdream for the dialogue assist -- I hope the rest lives up to expectations. Porn without plot, but with pegging. A

Comments

[sansets]

So I've got this problem, you see. Every time I've attempted to go through the story to find bits to quote back at you (BECAUSE THE WHOLE THING IS MADE OF AWESOME, OMG) I just wind up re-reading it. But suffice it to say, I am NEVER AGAIN going to think of that scene without imaging this transpiring before it. TOTALLY CANON. ♥ ♥ ♥

[ifreet]

You know what? I am A-OK with that problem! Thank you!

*twirls you*

[brynnmck]

OMG, this was FANTASTIC. Your character voices are just dead-on and delightful--you captured their dynamic EXACTLY, their simultaneous competition and connection, the way the competition is part of their connection. And the line about the sudden quiet in his head being wonderful--such a PERFECT observation, so much done with that tiny little sentence, AWESOME. Fabulous work!

[ifreet]

Thank you! I'm very glad you thought I got the dynamic right!

[akarui_rynka]

that was hot.

I love the voice that this was told in.

[ifreet]

*blush*

[dessert_first]

Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. What a clever, glorious, charming, hilarious, scorching read. How did you manage all that in just the one story?

I love the language you used, Holmes loving the sudden mental quiet Irene gifts him with, and the delightful interactions and thought processes:

"I would hate to think I'm not holding your attention." Her slim but strong fingers trailed down his torso and took his attention firmly in hand.

she rose up onto her knees to bring the deep V of her dressing gown to eye level. Sherlock sensed a clue.

She placed a pillow over the key and his assets both. "For your modesty. Do tell Dr. Watson I said hello?"

Bwah! Brilliant, all of it. \o/

[ifreet]

I blame Irene, for she is most of those adjectives. ;) The language was fun -- I got to break out the big words!

Thank you!

[mrswolfwood]

OMFG

O____________o

The battle for dominance of the kiss was as satisfying in its way as their usual battle of wits, and, considering the handicap of his position, he felt he was acquitting himself quite well.

(best line)

[ifreet]

Hee, reaction. Look, I wrote het! *beams*

Thank you!

hmmmm

[mrswolfwood]

you wrote het, yes....very twisty.....*cringes* good het involving buggering SHERLOCK HOLMES how is this POSSIBLE?!!?! ^_^

answer: 'cause it's you and you're that damn good!