poem or what i think could be a poem

Jun 14, 2005 00:16

Tell me when to stop believing
And warn me when I’m no longer seeing
Kill the phrase that stabs like daggers in your head
And come back to me as a sweet memory
That no longer torment my days as gloomy as they may seem.
Notify me when the world stops spinning
And I will call you when my heart stops beating
I don’t know if I’m your bad luck nor if I’m just a thought
But how can I know what I am if you don’t even know what you even are

do tell me what you think so far please
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