Jumping To My Dream [Dream 23]

[iffahsyuqaira]

Title : Jumping to My Dream
Pairing : HSJ x OC
Genre : School, Comedy, Friendship 
Rating : g 
Disclaimer : I only own the lame story with terrible grammar mistakes.
Warning : Unbeta-ed!
Summary : Midori Gakuen was a prestigious institute of boarding junior high and highschool and university. But the students found it as prison since only

Comments

[swimmer_chen]

hey. i went to search for my parts cause although i like the story, I have a complaint (sorry). can you please not include so much technical terms and concepts? cause i kinda lost interest after awhile. i'm reading for leisure, not to have to read all these notes at the end to understand what i'm reading. that's the only thing. this is really interesting, but no offense. i have no interest in doing this. however, i know it's cause you're trying to review for your big test so I didn't say anything. If you're finished with that test, can you stop? I mean, I thought it was a good idea, so it wasn't a lie, but I guess I didn't foresee that it would get tedious for me after awhile. I'm not sure what others think about this, and I'm not trying to offend anyone. I want everyone to have fun reading, but it's just that it got really tedious after awhile cause I have to read extra stuff to know what I'm reading about, and no offense, I don't have that much interest in science.

That's another reason why I stopped reading. Cause I have to spend so much time figuring out what I'm reading about cause I don't remember that much about science, especially during vacation time. And since that's why I don't have the time normally, I have to wait, but i never really have that much time. when i finally have more time to read, it's been so long i dont remember where i left off....

sorry i ranted a bit, and i might have offended you and maybe other readers. if you're mad at me, i understand cause i wasn't totally truthful with you. however, i just want to say i want to keep reading, but i can't if it will continue with more terms and concepts, and if that's the case then I have no choice if you want to take my OC out...

[iffahsyuqaira]

thank you for the complain!
I accept it openly. Perhaps, I become too excited of it XD Well nobody complained before ^^

Yup, I shouldn't think like others are same with me ><(that's really my weakness, seriously, I've to improve it ^^)

So yeah, what if I put it as footnote? So you can always skip reading it. Or is it still annoying?

to be honest, I'm thinking of finishing this before my test, so whole of it will be flooded with facts (original plan) but yeah, I've to admit that your part got the most ^^ I'm really really sorry for that *bow deeply*

again, thank you so much for the comment, I appreciate it ^^ and sorry for offending you *bow again*

[swimmer_chen]

oh i'm sorry. i thought only parts of it will be for the test prep, and it'll be finished after. then i guess i have no choice. i'll try to read more of it...

didn't you already put it as a footnote?.... i'm not sure what you mean by that.

it's okay, would you mind putting the terms and concepts more evenly at other people's parts? maybe then i can enjoy reading my part! =) sorry about that. i'm just not too much of a science nerd :/

I hope you do well on the test! =) I won't complain anymore now I know that it can't be helped, sorry for the trouble! =)

and you haven't done anything to offend me =) I was just a bit overwhelmed to understanding your story...

[iffahsyuqaira]

I mean for the two latest chapter which is yours, i put it in middle of story

Sure i'll put on others too :) perhaps just bit 'too over' on yours..but don't worry, you won't have that kind of part anymore (if you notice, this is the only part of yours that ot the most scientific term..the previous part didn't ^^)

it's okay, I'm open to critism! Mistakes is the best teacher! And critics is the best advice! Just feel free to complain more if you feel of doing so~~

my advice for you: don't think too much of the scientific term cause it does not influence the story..you can always get rid of it ^^

and thanks~ I'll do my best!