[FANFIC] Like Pinning Butterflies

Nov 23, 2009 18:25

Title: Like Pinning Butterflies (Six)
Author: ienvy
Fandom: South Park
Pairing: Craig/Tweek
Rating: NC-17 (just to be safe, no smut but plenty of violence)
Summary: Craig Tucker is sick. And Craig Tucker is madly, irrevocably obsessed with Tweek Tweak.
Warnings: This story is NOT for those who are easily disturbed or upset. This story is intended to ( Read more... )

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razpberry November 25 2009, 02:21:03 UTC
skjfdjfhkdjhf ;3; I don't even know what to say, I just want to wibble and cry lol because... because, dude, the imagery.

I seriously love the imagery in this fic SO much. It's sooo amazing, I actually get OVERWHELMED by the imagery, it has such an emotional impact. It's like getting punched in the gut by something staggeringly beautiful @___@ I feel like I've exhausted all the things I could possibly say about this fic in all my other reviews because I find myself using the word "beautiful" like about ten times every time I review lol but I can't HELP it, it's just such an adequate word. It's one thing to just have Craig going around slashing bodies and grinning like a madman, it's another to make it look like a work of art :/

it's not like.... "rape and murder is totally gnarly and awesome lol", it's more like.. like the combination of all those sensory details at the end? with this imagery of the church and the sound imagery of the echoing screams and then the air being so thick with SIN? that is such like a CRAZY awesome way to paint everything. Like you can feel the pulse of the story radiating through the words and the images. :/

also I am a huge fan of your psycho Craig. I don't know if anyone else can pull him off as well as you but his crazy is infectiously lovable. His delirium, his fixations, every movement, ever word is so INSANE, it's almost like he's possessed or just some crazy vessel of evil D: Some times it's even hard to tell what's real or just part of his insanity whenever I'm reading about him because he's just so out-of-it. Like...I can't even begin to predict where he's going with anything, there's just no telling what he's going to do anymore. sflsdkjf SO COOL *thumbs-up*

um um and I am quite sad for Tweek and I'd be really jazzed if he didn't die. OR MAYBE I WANT HIM TO DIE so he doesn't suffer anymore, IDEK. I can't imagine what the hell Craig would do once Tweek is dead. The thought gives me chills :x The two have never even really got much of a chance to really just TALk to each other either, have they? To lay it all out on the table? Are they even capable of that anymore?

dflskjdf okay this comment is going all over the place :/ THANKS FOR UPDATING 8) I'm so happy I got to read another chapter of this, it seriously makes me day every time I do. <3

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ienvy November 25 2009, 05:06:11 UTC
You say you're running out of things to say, yet the replies keep getting longer and longer... hm... A PARADOX?! 83

No, but really... I absolutely love every little comment you leave and every single part to it makes me smile to myself, so... ~<3 Please don't stop because they're so fun to read and to see that people are understanding and putting actual thought into reading this. Because, really, I write it with the very intention of making people think about it.

You have no idea how much your comment about wondering if Craig is some sort of vessel for evil (A DEMON MAYHAPS?!) made me smile.

I don't want to say a lot of things because then it sort of gives things away and ruins them and the very point of this story is to make people think, so I won't say much else. But your comments fill me with happy, as per usual, even if you do use beautiful a lot. =] Nothing wrong with repetition. =]

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razpberry November 25 2009, 07:26:18 UTC
lkjdlkj I'm really happy that my comments make you happy! Lol, it's great, it's like me giving back for all the joy I get out of reading your stuff 8)

Dude, seriously, you're like one of my favorite fic writers right now, no joke D: Like I get uber excited whenever I see new stuff from you and it's ALWAYS a pleasure to read your fics and it's ALWAYS a pleasure to be able to feel so much emotion from someone else's writing that it passionately compels me to pour out my adoration in review-form. And, like, I'm a writer myself (or I like to think that I am) and I'm totally one of those people who are like a huge fan of writing and reading, so it's such a treat and, I'm not going to lie, inspiration to read REALLY good fic :) Like, I totally THANK you just for simply writing! I wish I could just review every single thing you write but then I'd feel repetitive and annoying lol

I never really get a chance to just tell fic authors how much I simply just like THEM as writers in general, but I just <3 you so much lol so THERE YOU GO 8)

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