[FANFIC] Paint - Craig/Tweek

[ienvy]

Title: Paint
Author: ienvy
Fandom: South Park
Pairing: Craig/Tweek
Rating: PG
Summary: #63 Masterpiece The Table
Warnings: IT'S FLUFFY! - Because I already write enough macabre stuff as it is. ;]
Notes: Written for chloegdgc

Comments

[razpberry]

eeeeeee~! <--this was noise I was honest to god making the entire time I was reading this :| I swear, I'm really glad my roommates are not in the room cuz they'd be like "IS THERE LIKE A LITTLE ANIMAL IN THE ROOM OR SOMETHING"

this was sooo fucking adorable dkfjgfd and there were so many things I liked about it! I'm actually going to talk about them in a list so I don't go all over the place with this comment haha

A) it was Craig/Tweek, okay, and I feel like I haven't read a cute enough/decent enough/heart-poundingly-lovely enough one in too long a time. it was making me kind of sad haha :/ so yes, thank you for that 8D

B) I love the way you write! It always FLOWS perfectly, the prose is EXCELLENT and like it always manages to SUIT whatever you're writing about. I think my favorite part about this was the big chunky paragraphs with the run-on sentences/streams of consciousness. Like, it was SO perfect. Like, even though this wasn't 1st person POV you could FEEL Tweek's anxiety through the syntax of the prose. 8D

C) GOD THIS WAS SO FUCKING ADORABLE and relatable :3 man, like... Craig/Tweek is special to me because I can totally relate. I have my own Craig (albeit it's an unrequited love D:) but um yeah I can't tell you how many times I've read C/T fic where I'm like DANG THIS IS SO US. And like yeah it was the same case here. I think that first paragraph cinched it, where Tweek can only do well when Craig's not around? I've actually said to myself, "I can do well in English class on the days when she doesn't show up." And then Tweek acting like a nervous spazz when Craig IS there? LIFE STORY, DUDE. I can totally relate to being acting half-retarded only when she was around. >: SO IT'S LIKE... that made the fic all the more adorable! Cuz I could squee with empathy! Lol

D) um... oh yeah, so your Tweek and Craig are freakishly in character and it makes me sooo happy

This is my favorite part of the entire damn thing

"U-Uh, Craig?" Tweek murmurs while setting down his brush. "I... I really can't work like this... it's... uh, oh, I mean... it's not really your fault... but... it's hard to work while you're... you know, staring."

Craig drags his eyes up slowly across Tweek, staring into his eyes for a moment before blinking very slowly and Tweek realizes that he doesn't intend to say a damn thing.

"... Okay..." He squeaks, face going hot again as he focuses his attention back onto the painting.

"Tweek," Craig's voice makes him jump. "are you gay?"

LOLLLL I love Tweek's awkwardly adorable "OKAY..." like seriously I want to squeeze his face and be embarrassed with him. AND CRAIG. SO BLUNT. I love it. <3 But they were both very true to themselves right here and I enjoyed it immensely. :D

E) um I loved this because I thought it was very beautiful! It was short and nothing REALLY happened physically between Craig and Tweek, but SO MUCH happened without words or much action and that just GETS ME right here *pats heart* because I'm a sucker for sickeningly sweet love some times. I can't even explain it, but...it makes me happy and I love it!!

Why does everything you write make me so happy omg D: I hope I see lots more Tweek/Craig from you, my dear! (and speaking of which.....Like Pinning Butterflies...? D: no pressure, just... wonderin'....if an update is coming...sdlkdsj) and to be honest, any pairing you write just automatically turns out beautifully. I don't review EVERYTHING but I still think everything you write is pure awesomesauce :)

[ienvy]

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you honestly have no idea how happy your reviews make me feel! >////<

I can't even begin to tell you how awesome it is to wake up first thing in the morning, check your mail and see a review like THIS. It's just... it's a very happy moment. I wish I could respond to everything you mentioned, but... I just can't. I find it so awesome that you're willing to take the time out to write so much.

And I'm glad I was able to make this a good fic for you. Really, really glad! =3 And Like Pinning Butterflies is in the middle of a chapter right now, it's a hard chapter to write so I'm trying to do so very carefully. But thank you sooooo much~<3