to stab or not to stab

[ieatchu]

First Merlin fic ever, lol ;; Something to get me out of my writing rut :D Concrit would be very much appreciated! :)

Title: To Stab or Not to Stab
Author: ieatchu / shikanashi_kk
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2187
Pairing: Arthur/Merlin

Disclaimer: Merlin and all of its characters do not belong to me.

Summary: In which Arthur's hand is the size of a chicken (a smaller

Comments

[der_jemand]

Awww! *__*
It's great! Definately in character - although I'm not really into the fandom just enjoying the show (in the German translation...), so maybe you shouldn't rely on my word. But they certainly feel and sound like Merlin and Arthur so yes, it's a great fic.
Ah, I smiled all the time and still do. Made my evening so much better. Thank you. =)

[ieatchu]

LATE REPLY, sorry ;; And thank you very much! :D It's a relief to hear that they're in character XD; Glad it made your evening, bb :) Thank you again!

[koishii_hime]

I AM TRYING TO BE ALL "THIS IS AWESOME" BUT I CAN ONLY BE AMUSED ABOUT COMPARING HIS HAND TO A CHICKEN, INSTEAD OF SOMETHING TYPICAL, LIKE A WATERMELON OR SOMETHING. *CACKLES*

[ieatchu]

A WATERMELON'S TOO BIG, LOL XD OR. ERR. I COULDA WRITTEN A SMALLER THAN AVERAGE WATERMELON, I GUESS. GOOD POINT. XD

[ketsudan]

XDDDD
I'm still laughing over how medieval that technique is.

[ieatchu]

Late reply bb :( But Arthur, the Lord of all Smooth Moves XD *loves you*

[ketsudan]

Lord of the Smooth Moves, eh? Then what's Merlin?

Ridiculously Adorable?

[hermitknut]

Aww, great stuff :) Heehee, "stab me" *giggles* ah, joy. I love the repeat of "with a single blow" from ep1, too :D
HK

[ieatchu]

Thank you very much, bb! :) "Stab me" XD Oh, the innuendo. I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

[frames_in_aria]

Wheee~ It's aww-inducing and lovely ♥

It's nice to see you here, btw, I think I've seen you at Naruto fandom. Though I'm not there as often as I like, I remember loving your fics there. It's nice to see a familiar name coming to Merlin fandom ♥ ♥ ♥

[ieatchu]

Aww, thank you very, very much! :) And oh, it's been so long since I've last been in the Naruto fandom XD; But I'm flattered that you remember my stuff there! ^^;

The Merlin fandom's not hard to love, really ♥ Thank you again! :D