Fic: Circles (Angel, Dawn) PG

[idyll]

This is a rambling telling type thang that came from who the hell knows where. I'd say that I'll get around to doing something else with it, or cleaning it up, except that I won't.

Title: Circles
Rating: PG
Characters: Angel, Dawn
Timeline: Post-Not Fade Away

Comments

[maybedarkpink]

Oh my goodness. That was so awesome! I never thought much about Dawn's Keyness leading to immortality, but you wrote it so well. And Dawn and Angel! But platonic, the kind of platonic that is just heartbreakingly intimate, though. Gah. I don't really think it needs cleaning up, the rambling as you put it, kind of adds to the whole sense of helpless ness and themes of repetitiveness and circularity. I love love love this! I will probably pimp at a later date. Great job!

[idyll]

Thanks! You're such a darling. I started with this a while ago and just got in the mood to finish it up. Telling is bad, I know this, but I liked the forced distance it gate between Dawn and the events. Seems fitting.

[_divya_]

Man, this is great. I love your narrative style.

[idyll]

Thanks, sweetie! This one is just all over the place rambling, but I dig it. Hee, and thanks for the rec!!!

[dodyskin]

Beautiful.

[idyll]

Thanks, sweetie.

[netgirl_y2k]

That was absolutly brilliant. Love the idea of Dawn's immortality.

[idyll]

Hee, thanks. I had this on my hard drive for a while and I wasn't going to do finish it up because there've been a few stories with a similar angle lately. Glad I did!

[kristinholt]

::whimper::

[idyll]

I'll take that as a compliment and just say, Thank you.

[kristinholt]

Yup, that was a compliment. And was all I could form into a reasonably understandable form.

Or something.

Wow.

That was also running thru my poor little head.