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Dec 11, 2007 21:32

I'm sort of desperately in need of a distraction* (as if you couldn't tell from the two other posts I've made today). Since I've also been turning myself in circles as far as fic goes (dear brain: please to be stopping the overthinking), I figured I could attempt to kill two birds with one stone ( Read more... )

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2 of 2 idyll December 12 2007, 06:54:26 UTC
The room wavers in Bob's peripheral vision when he makes his way to the bathroom. He turns on the lights, blinks against the sudden brightness, and his eyes feel odd, his lashes heavy. It takes him a moment to focus on his reflection in the mirror over the sink, and when he does he thinks that he needed to either be a) more drunk, or b) less drunk, to deal with what he sees.

Gerard didn't just line Bob's eyes, dab a little color and swipe a subtle bit of mascara on. Instead, he went all out. It's over the top, but not in the way that My Chem's stage make-up is. That's more like costuming of the face. This, what he did to Bob, is more...feminine.

Bob's eyelashes, which are usually fair enough to be invisible, are long, thick and black. They spider outwards, with a sharp upwards curl at the edges. Just above that is a dark swatch of color, some kind of darkly sparkled brown with hints of deep gold. The eyeliner is dark brown, not the shock of black that most of the scene uses, smudged artfully under Bob's lower lid and drawn thickly at the lashline on his upper lid.

Bob blinks, his gaze going to the lower half of his face, then back to his eyes. Bob's not sure if he has words for it, for the way it looks, the way it feels to see it, to be it.

Gerard comes up behind him and props his chin on Bob's shoulder. He stares at Bob's reflection with narrowed eyes. "Liang yi," he says vaguely. He touches Bob's facial hair with the tips of his fingers. "Yang." His fingers slide upwards, soft and careful, to the corner of Bob's eye. "Yin."

Bob's own hands are shaking, something in him unsettled and disoriented. Gerard makes gentle shushing noises, turns his head and presses his lips to Bob's bearded cheek. In that same hushed tone he says, "You're still you. Still Bob. Always."

He pushes away from Bob then and slides out of the room with the slight brush of fabric-against-fabric. Bob grips the counter in front of him and takes a heaving breath.

.End

blahblah repeated apologies for typos that my visually impaired self might not have spotted. Also, um, yeah, this went to an odd place.

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Re: 2 of 2 x__kes__x December 12 2007, 21:22:12 UTC
Eek! I am sick and miserable, but this made me not so miserable. I love all the details. The multi-tiered makeup case made me smile, because Gerard would so have one. I cracked up at Gerard almost burning Bob with his cigarette because I've totally done the same thing while drunk... The mascara application descriptions were priceless. And then Bob gets to see it. I loved Gerard so much in this part. Especially the yin and yang. *loves*

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Re: 2 of 2 idyll December 13 2007, 03:26:57 UTC
oh, I'm so glad you liked this! It's always odd when I do these for people I don't know so well/just met, because I end up being all, "Whoah, maybe this isn't what s/he was expecting." Heh.

And, oh, yes, me and cigarettes while drunk have led to so many singes over the years. *facepalm*

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Re: 2 of 2 x__kes__x December 13 2007, 03:46:56 UTC
I managed to burn my lip once... my girlfriend laughed so hard. -.-

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Re: 2 of 2 idyll December 13 2007, 04:02:56 UTC
I HAVE DONE THAT! I was drunk at the time and I totally just put the wrong end of the cigarette in my mouth. Also, back when I smoked Marlboro Lights, I was notorious for accidentally lighting the filter end. Damn things didn't have a different colored filter, man!

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Re: 2 of 2 x__kes__x December 13 2007, 04:28:33 UTC
lol. My best friend has done the light the wrong end thing too. She was smoking Camels though, so she didn't have your excuse.

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Re: 2 of 2 arsenicjade December 13 2007, 03:03:57 UTC
Your dialogue is so amazing, the way Gerard says things that are SO bizarre and yet just fit, and that he SEES Bob, oh man. I am maybe so in love with Gerard and Bob for a moment.

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Re: 2 of 2 idyll December 13 2007, 03:27:24 UTC
*flappy hands* THANK YOU!

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Re: 2 of 2 turlough August 21 2009, 20:31:28 UTC
I found this through delicious and I'm happy I did, it's beautiful. And very thought provoking, the things Gerard brings out in Bob.

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Re: 2 of 2 idyll August 24 2009, 20:43:59 UTC
Thanks, I'm glad you liked this!

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