Comments | idyll: Fic: stay beside me where i lie (John/Ronon) NC17 (Part 1/2)

idyll

Fic: stay beside me where i lie (John/Ronon) NC17 (Part 1/2)

Oct 06, 2007 01:19

Okay, wow, I really need to let this go. So I am.

Title: stay beside me where i lie
Rating: NC17
Pairing: John/Ronon
Word Count: ~19,000
Story Notes: This is a sequel to in the absence of a place to be and is set about 6 months later ( Read more... )

my fic: all fandoms, my fic: sga

Comments 4

tesserae_ October 6 2007, 06:04:11 UTC

You posted!

(This is on my list for morning + coffee, but I just wanted to say YAY!)

moonriddler_mim January 28 2009, 23:15:23 UTC

John loses track of what he's doing and can only stare. Because--wet...naked...Ronon.

yeah.... that was pretty much my response too. *____*

Ronon makes the same happy noise he did when John used the chocolate sauce.

ohdearlord. you broke my brain... *__* *drools*

and this is so good in so many ways! they feel... mature in a way they don't in the series. I love it when a writer can take characters, make them their own and still keep them the same.

*on to next part*

stunning nrrrdy_grrrl March 21 2009, 08:51:40 UTC

I wrote professionally for over a decade and when I come across something like this, it's so startling that I don't even get jealous. I just sort of unravel and turn back into a reader who just wants to hear more story- it creates a powerful little moment where I remember why I became so fond of writing to begin with.

Whatever it is that you do with yourself, with your time and energy, I hope you have seriously considered writing. You are a gifted storyteller and have an incredible grasp of dialog, pacing, characterization and drama.

Okay, that's the adult serious comment. Now for the fangrrrl action: How is it that this pairing does not dominate all SGA slash? Seriously? Are people brain-damaged? LOOK AT THEM! Watch them shoot at stuff! What's NOT smoldering about them?!You could write slash just about their HAIR and it would still be hot.

Okay. Done now. Write more, please. Yay.

Re: stunning idyll April 3 2009, 14:40:40 UTC

Wow, thank you so much! I did consider writing professionally for a while a bunch of years ago, but gradually I just stopped thinking about it and pursuing it.

And I totally agree! They are just so DOING IT on the show!

You could write slash just about their HAIR and it would still be hot.

HAHAHAHAHA! I think you're right about that, too!