bedtime stories

[idontgiveafaux]

i downloaded that stupid avril lavigne song today. the one where she looks and dances like a pussycatwhore reject in the video. i don't even know why i did it - there's only one part of the song i vaguely like but now i have it on my ipod and i just feel so.. dirty.

well here's another fic i wrote ages ago that i'm posting. i went italics

Comments

[lackofmendacity]

Oh god, that was absolutely brilliant... though I am totally torn between either laughing my arse off or running off for a wank ;)

No really, you are incredible. ♥ Draco was cute at the beginning, with his excessive poncing over his hair, but then the way he positively tortures Harry... yay for mannipulative!Draco *cheers*

I think the best line would have to be 'Once more, with feeling' - so cruel of our favourite blond, and poor Harry *offers Harry hug*

As for your love affair with the italics, don't worry about it - it wasn't excessive, so throughout the course of the fic it was used effectively in terms of emphasis :) I think you used dialogue really effectively - normally, most people don't like dialogue-centred fics, but yours was sharp and witty, so *thumbs up*

Thanks for the delightful fic! ♥

Mmm... I didn't realise you wrote fics that didn't include borderline consent smut *grins*

[idontgiveafaux]

manipulative!draco. oh.my.god i love him.

yay thank you for your kind comment ::loves:: i do like reading what you have to say (mostly because you're oh-so-lovely to me :D)

Mmm... I didn't realise you wrote fics that didn't include borderline consent smut *grins*

neither did i! i must have ran out of angst and angry sex ideas that day...

[lackofmendacity]

Manipulative!Draco, cruel-bastard!Draco, evil-dominating!Draco... I think it's Draco you love, period. :D

Oh? Would you prefer it if I were ever-so-mean to you? ;) Mmm... I wonder if you're masochistic.

Heheh, take care of yourself then! ♥

[idontgiveafaux]

yes it is. i love me some hot draco. mmhmm.

i am masochistic

[erneuerung]

This is amazing.

I loved the story and how it became a story of what was currently happening . . . and Draco telling Harry to beg :D

One small thing: ‘The blonde couldn’t quite here that.’ --> 'here' should be 'hear'

Also, males are blond.

Thanks for sharing this!

[lackofmendacity]

♥ I think I love you. ♥

[aki_hoshi]

I love the spelling "blond". But it's not like that in the US. I should know, I get shit for spelling it the "wrong" way from one of my betas all the time...lol She's just joshing me, but still. "Blond" for guys makes so much more sense! But over here, it's "blonde" for everyone... So sad...

[sesheta_66]

First I've ever heard of 'blond' for males and 'blonde' for females before! I'm impressed with the fandom ... I learn something new every day.

I'm Canadian and use 'blonde' all the time. I shall cease and desist.

[silver_osiris]

Lovely. :)

[idontgiveafaux]

*g*

[ephram_nash]

oohh....GOSH..love Draco and Harry in this!! XD..

sometimes Harry can be so thick cant he? eh heh...

and i love the interaction between them, and the way Draco keep teasing Harry ..... =p

[idontgiveafaux]

yay thank you :D:D:D

[tomxfelton]

Adorable! *squeals* I wish I had those kind of bedtime stories *sighs wistfully*.

[idontgiveafaux]

don't we all? lol.x