a year in the life of

[idontgiveafaux]

this is the unofficial sequel to dysfunction [my favourite out of the entire table, i think] enjoy :)

Title: A year in the life of
Author: idontgiveafaux
Rating: R
Prompt Set: 50.1
Prompt: 046, 047, 048, 049
Word Count: 200 x 4
Summary: Seasons spark up memories past
Warnings: (at your discretion) Domination, violence, sex & themes, rape
Notes:

Comments

[apuhthetik]

That was great. =) I can't tell who's telling the story though, very nice.

[idontgiveafaux]

that's what i wanted to keep it like but then i put up that other link so it's kind of ruined, but hey :)

& thank you :D

[just_heidi]

This was really good. The way you wrote Dracos mood changes was very believable and so heartbreaking that he can be sweet one moment and the next be a bloody psychopath.

[idontgiveafaux]

*g* thank you very much sweetie :D

[if_in_solitude]

This is so aweful (but I'm fully away that it's meant to be).

The way that the domestic abuse is mixed with love is so heartbreaking. And it's so real.

I love this bit: I waited for days by myself in the house - too scared to leave in case he returned while I wasn’t there even though I knew deep down he was never coming back.

Even after everything. Oh, Harry!

[idontgiveafaux]

i know, sometimes he's so infuriating to the point of wanting to slap him (but i think given the situation that would make him even more twisted?) :\

& thanks hon :)

[imjustdifrent]

I guess I should go re-read whatever this is the sequel to, but I loved this one all by itself. Especially how I could almost see Harry being the evil one, the one beating the shit out of Draco... but then you mention a Dark Mark and I'm all like, "whoa... Draco's the evil one?"

And then I stop to think about it, and in all honesty, I think Harry could just as easily have a Dark Mark and still be the evil one, all so much more because of the Dark Mark. This piece just screams evil!Harry and I love it. :)

[idontgiveafaux]

XD glad you enjoyed hon

i don't know why i put that stupid link up. although both pieces are written in the same style, the whole point of not knowing who was who in this one just got kind of spoiled when i put up the other link. that, and the fact i didn't write it in mind as a sequel anyway. ack. whatever.

i never thought about darkmarked!harry but it's a deliciously evil idea :D

[lackofmendacity]

Oh yes, I remember Dysfunction. :D It's also one of my favourites from your table (my absolute favourite fic of yours being the one where Harry gets raped by Devil's Snare, for the record. *g*) and I love you for writing a sequel. *gropes you*

This fic is fantastic, I honestly don't know where to begin ranting. :* It's so interesting to see Harry's point of view here, especially in comparison to Draco's last time. The way Draco's mood changes is really evident here, I never realised he was so schizophrenic in the prequel, but the speed at which his behaviour changes in quite alarming.

The way you use the seasons is gorgeous. ♥ (Even if your last paragraph made me very sad :P). You know there's still quite a lot unanswered, if you ever feel like writing another sequel. *hint*

My favourite part would have to be, "It was winter when we made love so gently and with such passion that a single tear rolled down his cheek after he came and he lowered his face towards mine and kissed me. It was winter that he raped me so brutally I

[idontgiveafaux]

oh my god, that's so weird. i went to a community yesterday (harry_submits) and i was reading through all the whore!harry stories and thoroughly enjoying myself and then i saw my default icon and i was like "someone has the same icon as me!" and then i realised it was my story i must have posted ages ago (the devils snare one) and there were comments from you and then you asked if you could friend me!! i was so happy when i saw it. i was like "jack, this is where we first met" (except i wasn't, because it wasn't titanic... don't ask, i'm in a stupid mood today.)

Sorry for another long rant, but you know how much I adore dysfunctional relationships. :) And you also know that you are fucking brilliant at writing them, so *cuddles you*

::cuddles back:: i love your long rants :) they make me fuzzy inside :D btw did you have a good time ski-ing?

[lackofmendacity]

Oh, poor Harry. There's a comm where all he does is get fucked ruthlessly by Draco (and others) 0_o

Awwww, Devil Snare rape... fond memories indeed. *wipes away tear* :)

I'm so glad I found your fic (though I think it was via another comm), otherwise I would never have found you. *worried at what could have been*

*clings to Jordan*

Heheh, skiing was fun, thanks. I only twisted a knee (and it's better now), so I'm pretty lucky. We saw so many people being carried down the mountains in a ski-stretcher after being injured, it was quite cute really. *g*

Which reminds me, how's your leg these days? You haven't said anything about it for awhile, and I hope the rainy weather isn't making it worse. *hugs you gently*

[idontgiveafaux]

Oh, poor Harry. There's a comm where all he does is get fucked ruthlessly by Draco (and others) 0_o

::stares weirdly:: it sounds like you almost feel sorry for that little cumslut of a tramp. ... ::blinks:: i don't know where that came from :\

Awwww, Devil Snare rape... fond memories indeed. *wipes away tear* :)

I'm so glad I found your fic (though I think it was via another comm), otherwise I would never have found you. *worried at what could have been*

*clings to Jordan*

::clings back:: don't think about the coulda shoulda woulda's. we know each other now ::sloppy kisses you:: besides, i don't like that theory or logic of thinking. because that could easily mean if i'd left the house one minute earlier that day and managed to catch the first bus instead of having to wait for the second i could be with my boyfriend right now. incidentally i'm not talking about anything inparticular - when i say 'that day' i just mean a random day but going on that train of thought, it could be applied for almost anything in life. like that film