WINNER || GOT YOUR NAME HANGING FROM MY CHAIN (Mino/Taehyun)

Jun 20, 2015 14:08

GOT YOUR NAME HANGING FROM MY CHAIN
Mino/Taehyun
NC-17, 4.1k.
warnings: violence, sex during violence/in public?, slight bloodplay

A thousand years after the world dies, being dependent on another person is archaic, life-threatening, and absolutely necessary. Mad Max-inspired A/B/O verse.

(written for winnerexchange; originally posted here)

Taehyun wakes up with a dreadful, familiar ache in his lower back and sweat beading on his forehead. )

p: mino/taehyun, c: mino, f: winner, *fic, c: taehyun

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kalopsia June 25 2015, 12:11:15 UTC
aah, i'm kind of rly embarrassed over how late this comment is /o\ but tbh i didn't read this when it was posted on winner exchange because a/b/o is just supremely not my thing, nor is smut, nor is namsong (i'm awful >__<) but my friend rly loved it, and my curiosity got the best of me so i just read it now too and OMG!! this is SO GOOD!!! you world build SO WELL (i love the bits describing how their bodies became fucked up, how people make a living with human trafficking, etc) and you tied in the a/b/o thing to the dystopian universe seamlessly!! like i usually find it super jarring, but here it worked really well?? also i love how you made every single member of winner so distinct with their roles and characters, small or large (as an aside, your seunghoon “Not interested,” Seunghoon says, and raises the sight of his rifle to his eye. such A MAN >___<).

also the atmosphere of the fic was so... wild, violent and unhinged (the block b cameo omg), you did such a great job with the tone of everything. like, i really love how you wrote your dialogue: "SONG MINHO," the voice booms again. "YA-FUCKING-HOO!" and "Babe," he says, "I'm going to fuck you, after I fuck the rest of y'all over." omgggg i absolutely love good dialogue, and yours is so well written and appropriate to the AU they're in. aaah, everything was so high key and frantic... untamed... your world building is so good. and i loved the tension you built up between taehyun and minho like "I smelled you before I saw you." Minho's voice is a low, barely audible rasp. i loved this line so much, the ust between them is so uninhibited and animalistic and then you pair it with lines that seem really swoon worthy out of context "I've been looking for you my whole life.". ahhhh, the effect of it made my spine feel tingly T___T

anyway i really loved this!!! ty so much for writing this! both your fics from the exchange were so 10/10 *__* i'm anticipating of any other winner fic you choose to write in the future u__u

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idolkiller July 3 2015, 00:14:05 UTC
i'm embarrassed by how it took me to reply to this >_____< i was busy for a few days and then it slipped my mind lskdfh THIS IS SUCH A NICE COMMENT THOUGH, i'm really flattered you enjoyed the fic even though it's usually not your platter of fish :'D i have mixed feelings about a/b/o myself, so this feedback is extra relieving? to receive? especially wrt to how it fits in the universe u__u;; and omg i was afraid some of the dialogue would be too camp-y / the vibe wouldn't work outside of the actual mad max movie so u____u;;; I'M GRATEFUL ;;;

ultimately this was really fun to write so i'm especially happy that other people had fun with it too :")))) I REALLY WANT TO WRITE MORE WINNER FIC now let's see if i can kick my own ass enough to cooperate...

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