EXO || November drabble 'week' (day one)

[idolkiller]

i don't know much about love songs but i can sort of rap
Kris/Chanyeol (ambiguous gay chicken??)
G, ~1.7k wc.

prompt from one_if_by_land: "Krisyeol rapping together and Chanyeol delicately trying to give Kris tips while fanning his vanity at the same time" (spoiler: the prompt is more exciting than the drabble)

Comments

[kenkabu]

ugh beeeeeesssttt!!! What a lovely fic! I know this is Kris/Chanyeol but I love how you included so much interaction from the other members, from Baekhyun's teasing to Chen talking in the background of Kris' call (also, your Chen is the CUTEST. "DATES!" DKJA:DAJ). And Chanyeol's casual possessiveness! swoon

ALSO what I really liked (besides everything i guess) was that you address Kris' ineptitude at rapping without making painting him like a loser or something -- I mean specifically in the way that everyone, especially Kris and Chanyeol, recognizes Kris' weaknesses, but they still love him and support him and waaaah Chanyeol trying to so hard to help Kris improve! hyung, do you ever, have you listened to rap? CHANYEOLDJALD:AJDA:LDDJ

AND ALSO ALSO I really loved their level of comfort with each other: Kris knowing Chanyeol's password, Kris giving leadership advice (LOL HE WOULD), Chanyeol sharing his mixes with other members T__T like TAO??? ugh my heart my poor heart

okay and last thing: i can't believe they didn't kiss omg, after that FLAGRANT DISPLAY OF AFFECTION. it made that scene 100x more cute for some reason though ;0;

Thanks for writing this! Very enjoyable read.

[idolkiller]

OMG this comment is so lovely??? thanks for taking the time to write it, i'm really really glad you enjoyed the fic! ;_____;
i think writing the background characters and friendly banter is possibly my favourite part anyway LOL so i'm pleased that worked for you keke. AND I'M PLEASED YOU POINTED OUT ALL MY FAVOURITE INDULGENT THINGS, like the password and the non-kissing and aaaah your comment is basically everything i was trying to aim for, so :***** <3