EXO || November drabble 'week' (day one)

Nov 13, 2012 00:12

i don't know much about love songs but i can sort of rap
Kris/Chanyeol (ambiguous gay chicken??)
G, ~1.7k wc.

prompt from one_if_by_land: "Krisyeol rapping together and Chanyeol delicately trying to give Kris tips while fanning his vanity at the same time" (spoiler: the prompt is more exciting than the drabble)

Kris shows up after lunch, still dressed in his airport clothes. )

c: kris, *fic, c: chanyeol, p: kris/chanyeol, f: exo

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one_if_by_land November 13 2012, 05:36:42 UTC
scream!

SCREAM!!

I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU actually you already know all of my thoughts on this so I don't know what else to say. (jk, of course I always have more to fawn over.) your krisyeol is always so playful! hovering between that line of easy friendship and a tease of something more, a magnetism between two people who are similar in all the ways that make them perfectly complement each other. YOUR LITTLE JOKES ARE SO GOOD, that yixing reference, baekhyun's "Did you just make fun of someone else's rapping", taking a selca & uploading it onto weibo (sob, hit a little too close to my heart tbh). and I love how it turned sweet in the end, with chanyeol discreetly gauging kris' reactions and kris gently indulging him in the way he does best. I eagerly anticipate the rest of your krisyeol month n__n

a million ♥♥♥♥

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idolkiller November 13 2012, 14:06:12 UTC
scream GO AWAY YOU ARE SO INDULGENT ;___; THANK YOU.... FOR ALL YOUR TIRELESS BETA EFFORTS............ next time (christmas????) i promise i will actually make your prompt fun ok ;__; THANK U FOR YOUR SWEET FEEDBACK ALSO ;~; sigh but really sometimes I think my favourite part of fic is just making the band members make platonic fun of each other u___u

what do you mean by month

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idolkiller November 13 2012, 14:11:27 UTC
omg you're so sweet, THANK YOU FOR YOUR KIND WORDS ;___; i wish i could just get away with writing a fic that's only dialogue and members continuously making fun of each other bc that's infinitely the easiest part u___u kris has the patience of a saint u__u YOU TOO--omg are all my unnis actually the kris to my chanyeol....

WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY MONTH!!!!

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crayeol November 14 2012, 08:53:50 UTC
oh my gooooooood freaking out I had to seriously stop every other paragraph to spazz.

There's just this really lovely familiarity between them, and Chanyeol seems so nervous yet excited to take it to the next level. I wonder if Kris feels the same way and he's just playing tough? I see you staring at Chanyeol's mouth :9

In any case, argh, so cute. Kim Jongdae you are my king. The idea of mixtapes is perfect, and I always love seeing all those photos of them sharing music sigh. Sob i love my otp, and I feel so fulfilled now! \o/

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idolkiller November 14 2012, 23:40:20 UTC
sob THIS COMMENT IS SO NICE TT____TT thank youuu <33 YOUR SECOND LINE MADE ME SO HAPPY i feel like you just gave my drabble actual.. depth... like that is the feeling and story i wish i'd told but instead this is just stuff cobbled together u___u i'm happy you liked it!

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kim_ri November 15 2012, 01:15:18 UTC
I love your krisyeol like SO MUCH uggrgghjj your writing is really fresh and your humor is A+++

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idolkiller November 15 2012, 05:02:21 UTC
THANK YOU :D lol it's always hard to tell if something is still funny after rereading it yourself for like the nth time so T_T i'm glad you liked it <3

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srye November 15 2012, 02:49:19 UTC
I LOVE THISSSS.

"Stop thinking about being unfaithful." Kris pats his hand. "Look only at me for post-midnight rap dates."

"I'm going to throw up."

omggg lol KRISYEOL FTW \o/ I love the humor in this story :D

and this
"We should take a selca," Kris breathes, his eyes lowered to Chanyeol's mouth. "I'll upload it to weibo."

omg kris OTL
♥ ♥ ♥

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idolkiller November 15 2012, 05:04:28 UTC
how else can you put up with kris, amirite u___u thank you for reading ♥♥♥♥!

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