This will be a long and embarrassing comment so I apologize in advance. u___u EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS FIC IS INCREDIBLE; I actually forced myself to read slower mid-way through because I didn't want it to end!!
Chanyeol leverages the momentum of his fall and launches himself at Baekhyun with a roar. Baekhyun screeches, and then they’re bowling down the trail with their skis locked. omg, this is the most hysterical image ever. This Chanyeol is the best THE BEST THE BEST, ahhh! I don't think I've ever had so much fun reading a fic before.
Jongin barely waits until they’ve gone ten feet before he bats his eyelashes, and chirps, “I’m Baekhyun.” “I’m not even ashamed, you disrespectful brat,” says Baekhyun. “He was that good-looking.” “I’m ashamed,” says Jongdae. “You are an oil spill in human form.” “Okay break it up,” Kyungsoo claps. “Let’s change and get dinner.”
ALL OF YOUR CHARACTERS ARE AMAZINGGG, wahhh; my body actually hurts right now from trying to keep in my laughter through all 13k. BAEKHYUN'S INDIGNATION AT GETTING THROWN OFF A MOUNTAIN, his immediate fawning over Kris's looks, Tao's exaggerated concern after Kris's fall and HIS WHOLE FACE LOOKING LIKE A DEATH THREAT (wow, so accurate), Chanyeol pushing his cheeks up to demonstrate laughter, Jongin trying to sneak a pot into Kyungsoo's luggage, everything!! You have so many fantastic character details - like Lu Han touching Sehun's wrist when he leaves the conversation, Chanyeol collecting everyone's room cards - and every exchange felt very real, very comfortable, and the friendships came across so genuine.
His tone is flat, but Chanyeol’s always been good at reading people, and he can tell Kris is amused. The Kris/Chanyeol dynamic was sooooo lovely, how they commiserate over taking care of their respective groups, Chanyeol's friendliness effortlessly compensating for Kris's stoicism. WHICH, I love that even as we can tell Kris is more restrained than the others, he still has such a great sense of humor that fits perfectly with Chanyeol's ("It's a bit late to worry about making a good impression," // "The first time we met you told us you cliff people for fun." ♥♥). AND THE KRISYEOL FLIRTING WHEN THEY'RE ASKING EACH OTHER OUT TO DINNER, sososo adorable. I can't believe you even managed to fit in an infamous "Maybe next time." promise from Kris!!
“In case you’re a serial killer, remember that I have your friend too,” he taps a startled Zitao on the chest with the end of his ski pole, “and I know hapkido.” // “You don’t think I'd cover all my bases?” Kris lifts his eyebrows. “Zitao does wushu.” PERFECT OT4
Baekhyun rolls his eyes, and loops arms with both Yixing and Zitao. “Okay guys, my life’s in your hands,” he says loudly, and tries to pull them away. Baekhyun actually slayed me in this fic, because he's just so good - open and caring but still shameless with a playful bite; it's so easy to see why he's best friends with Chanyeol. Ahhh, that bit where he just pretends to struggle as Kris headlocks him, so wonderful.
If Kris’s jawline were a ski trail, Chanyeol would probably die on it. wow, let me smother you with love. And Chanyeol's gasp at realizing Kris purposely groped him (et tu, duizhang u_u)!!
Ahhhhh your ending stretch kept me totally holding my breath. He had thought Kris liked him back just as much-he still thinks so, mostly, but he’s already been wrong once. It’s not impossible that he’s been reading Kris wrong this whole time. THIS IS MY MOST FAVORITE CHANYEOL I'VE EVER READ - I love that he's intuitive and impulsive and forward, that he knows how to swing circumstances in his favor, his ease in sizing up people, knowing exactly how to react and push to get what he wants but that all of it comes at a price. You're right; he has a healthy grasp of his ego, but he relies so much on his own ability that when one thing goes wrong, everything else shakes with it.
Actually-- “How was I going to bring that up? Oh, by the way, I’m famous, touch my dick," ALL OF YOUR CHARACTERS ARE MY FAVORITE. I LOVE EVERYTHING. PLEASE WRITE MORE. ♥
omg this is such ;_; a nice comment ;_; i can't even ;__; I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT sob, especially the characterization o m g i was driving myself crazy, it's always the number one thing i focus on when i read fic so i'm so glad that my clumsy efforts worked out for you!!!! i love baekhyun and chanyeol and everyone soo much, this is so flattering to hear ♥
KRISYEOLBAEKTAO IS MY FAVOURITE OT4 well tied with chingu line ofc. i'm also really happy that you liked the ending stretch, because i was the whole time i was just like =_= rly this is the conflict. there was a point at like 6k when i wildly considered ditching everything b-but 6k is a big investment for me so ;_; i definitely plan on writing more!
Chanyeol leverages the momentum of his fall and launches himself at Baekhyun with a roar. Baekhyun screeches, and then they’re bowling down the trail with their skis locked. omg, this is the most hysterical image ever. This Chanyeol is the best THE BEST THE BEST, ahhh! I don't think I've ever had so much fun reading a fic before.
Jongin barely waits until they’ve gone ten feet before he bats his eyelashes, and chirps, “I’m Baekhyun.”
“I’m not even ashamed, you disrespectful brat,” says Baekhyun. “He was that good-looking.”
“I’m ashamed,” says Jongdae. “You are an oil spill in human form.”
“Okay break it up,” Kyungsoo claps. “Let’s change and get dinner.”
ALL OF YOUR CHARACTERS ARE AMAZINGGG, wahhh; my body actually hurts right now from trying to keep in my laughter through all 13k. BAEKHYUN'S INDIGNATION AT GETTING THROWN OFF A MOUNTAIN, his immediate fawning over Kris's looks, Tao's exaggerated concern after Kris's fall and HIS WHOLE FACE LOOKING LIKE A DEATH THREAT (wow, so accurate), Chanyeol pushing his cheeks up to demonstrate laughter, Jongin trying to sneak a pot into Kyungsoo's luggage, everything!! You have so many fantastic character details - like Lu Han touching Sehun's wrist when he leaves the conversation, Chanyeol collecting everyone's room cards - and every exchange felt very real, very comfortable, and the friendships came across so genuine.
His tone is flat, but Chanyeol’s always been good at reading people, and he can tell Kris is amused.
The Kris/Chanyeol dynamic was sooooo lovely, how they commiserate over taking care of their respective groups, Chanyeol's friendliness effortlessly compensating for Kris's stoicism. WHICH, I love that even as we can tell Kris is more restrained than the others, he still has such a great sense of humor that fits perfectly with Chanyeol's ("It's a bit late to worry about making a good impression," // "The first time we met you told us you cliff people for fun." ♥♥). AND THE KRISYEOL FLIRTING WHEN THEY'RE ASKING EACH OTHER OUT TO DINNER, sososo adorable. I can't believe you even managed to fit in an infamous "Maybe next time." promise from Kris!!
“In case you’re a serial killer, remember that I have your friend too,” he taps a startled Zitao on the chest with the end of his ski pole, “and I know hapkido.” // “You don’t think I'd cover all my bases?” Kris lifts his eyebrows. “Zitao does wushu.” PERFECT OT4
Baekhyun rolls his eyes, and loops arms with both Yixing and Zitao. “Okay guys, my life’s in your hands,” he says loudly, and tries to pull them away. Baekhyun actually slayed me in this fic, because he's just so good - open and caring but still shameless with a playful bite; it's so easy to see why he's best friends with Chanyeol. Ahhh, that bit where he just pretends to struggle as Kris headlocks him, so wonderful.
If Kris’s jawline were a ski trail, Chanyeol would probably die on it. wow, let me smother you with love. And Chanyeol's gasp at realizing Kris purposely groped him (et tu, duizhang u_u)!!
Ahhhhh your ending stretch kept me totally holding my breath. He had thought Kris liked him back just as much-he still thinks so, mostly, but he’s already been wrong once. It’s not impossible that he’s been reading Kris wrong this whole time. THIS IS MY MOST FAVORITE CHANYEOL I'VE EVER READ - I love that he's intuitive and impulsive and forward, that he knows how to swing circumstances in his favor, his ease in sizing up people, knowing exactly how to react and push to get what he wants but that all of it comes at a price. You're right; he has a healthy grasp of his ego, but he relies so much on his own ability that when one thing goes wrong, everything else shakes with it.
Actually-- “How was I going to bring that up? Oh, by the way, I’m famous, touch my dick," ALL OF YOUR CHARACTERS ARE MY FAVORITE. I LOVE EVERYTHING. PLEASE WRITE MORE. ♥
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KRISYEOLBAEKTAO IS MY FAVOURITE OT4 well tied with chingu line ofc. i'm also really happy that you liked the ending stretch, because i was the whole time i was just like =_= rly this is the conflict. there was a point at like 6k when i wildly considered ditching everything b-but 6k is a big investment for me so ;_; i definitely plan on writing more!
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