FIC: Fired (4/4) HIMYM

[idioticonion]

Part 4

"You idiot!"

Lily thwacks Barney across the back of the head with a rolled-up MacLaren's menu before sliding into the booth beside Marshall. "What in the hell, Barney?" She rounds on him, mascara smeared across her cheeks. Marshall drapes his arm around her but she shrugs it off as she realizes the mess Barney's in,

Comments

[smthwallflower]

Oh nooooooooOOOOEEESSSSS!!!

Okay, bullet points (cause I figure they're gonna be easiest):
- (okay, technically they're dashes... dashing dashes ;) )
- Lily thwacking Barney is an awesome visual
- >> Like why the hospital didn't call Barney's emergency contact when he was brought in, and why was Barney even allowed home. << YEA-HUH!!!! Go Marshall! Lawyer Marshal, lawyer!
- I really -really- want to know who that was on the other end of that phone call. And what they said. Oh-nooooooes!
- Marshall getting Barney's job is a little... scary? (Inch, love the name btw) I mean, it's kind of like he got Barney fired so that he could get the job, but not really, because he didn't know, but then he ENDED UP GETTING IT! GAH! NO!
- Way to explain why there aren't any kiddie/kiddie bumps yet ;)
- I love the way you got Barney and Robin back together, Barney needing, Robin needed. It just makes sense to me. <3
- LOVE how you left it opened ended. 4/4 kind of threw me, but this IS a good ending, and it def. leaves room for drabble...age? Ige? Drabble-ing-- which I read was your intention.

- AWESOME.

Ps. now I want more. Just saying ;)

[idioticonion]

Inch was the name of a detective in a story about a scottish serial killer. I love the name but he was a horrible guy. I really wanted to steal it. :-)

I like the idea of leaving the story there... for now. Because there's other character's POV I could explore, but it would have cheapened Marshall's downfall to include them here.

I want to wait and see what Monday's episode brings.