Title: Over the Edge
Fandom: Liar Game
Characters: Akiyama/Nao
Rating: M
Summary: Both Akiyama and Nao are vexed about the lack of sex in their relationship, and individually seek out to remedy it.
Notes: Written for
mi_tsu_ki for her winning bid at the
help_haiti auction. This is for her request of an M-rated Aki/Nao fic. It turned out more silly than sexy, but I
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hahahaha yes very nicely written xDDD you've carried both of them quite well though at the end nao seems a liiiitttllleee OOC but who cares! IT'S LOVE XDDDD
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I love how you have developed the story, and the sentence “By then, Akiyama is certain the sex will be too amazing to stop” has been engraved in my brain, making me feel so inspired~
In my opinion this is not silly; actually, I think that if they were a couple there would be a chance things would develop like this (Which doesn’t mean that Akiyama and Nao aren’t being a bit stupid here >_<;)
...I need another smile icon.
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They are...I like to think they would have at least talked about this before it got this bad...but ahh...it's so much harder to come up with a plausible reason why the are in this situation than it is to write it once they're there.
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Now I just need to come up with an idea for the other fic that isn't too scary or too obscure.
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oh it is amazing, indeed <3
it was interesting to know what both of them were thinking <3
nice job <3 *goes to fangirl a little bit more*
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