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Honestly, you are the first person to use it, but this is exactly what it is here for! I'm glad this service is going to be to the benefit of someone!
This is great concrit! You're English look fairly good to me (wouldn't even have known it wasn't your first language). You've been specific and polite.
If you want to go the extra mile then the 'constructive' (aka 'how do I fix this/make it better) part is what is lacking, but I can definitely understand where personal taste might stay your hand. You can, if you'd like, preface your suggestions with "this is what I would do if I were in your shoes" because that tends to indicate that your coming from a more personal place with your suggestions, and, a good deal of the time, your suggestions will give the person a 'eureka!' moment (even if it isn't necessarily about your suggestion).
However, the concrit, as it is, is perfectly acceptable and you are good to go! :)
Hee, your concrit makes me smile! You've done a really good job, I think. Definitely helpful (and the smudge trick examples are absolutely perfect). If you want to sharpen everything up, I'd just stick it into a spell check program (use Word, LJ's spell check option, or whatever is convenient for you) just to make sure you've spelled everything correctly and everything is completely clear. Other than that, I'd say this is a fine first foray into concrit for our community! Thanks for participating!
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This is great concrit! You're English look fairly good to me (wouldn't even have known it wasn't your first language). You've been specific and polite.
If you want to go the extra mile then the 'constructive' (aka 'how do I fix this/make it better) part is what is lacking, but I can definitely understand where personal taste might stay your hand. You can, if you'd like, preface your suggestions with "this is what I would do if I were in your shoes" because that tends to indicate that your coming from a more personal place with your suggestions, and, a good deal of the time, your suggestions will give the person a 'eureka!' moment (even if it isn't necessarily about your suggestion).
However, the concrit, as it is, is perfectly acceptable and you are good to go! :)
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