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The Empty Chasm of Light [2/2]

Jun 15, 2014 23:28

read part one

( It is the softest of kisses she will ever have with him but it’s OK. She’s dead, she accepts it. And now he does too. )

#oneshot, ♥: taemin/sulli, *exo, n1suni: a belief in vision, ♥: kai/krystal, ♥: taemin/krystal, *shinee, *f(x), a: nikka

Comments 9

onceuponataem June 15 2014, 20:34:21 UTC

spottus maximus

aoza June 16 2014, 05:06:48 UTC

all i could think about with this comment is that 'maximus' makes me think of 'gluteus maximus' which is basically the butt muscle.... so yeah. my brain got weird.

bollywoodrecord June 15 2014, 21:20:29 UTC

nikka ;___________________; omg this is so perfect i couldn't have seen anything better in krystal's perspective and even though this was originally really really bitter and heartbreaking THIS FIC IS ACTUALLY REALLY HAPPY WHAT THE FUCK what are writing skills omg teach me your ways nikka. i love how even though it was really emotional it was really serene and peaceful at the same time like she was just trying to mend everything before she finally left i just yesssss thumbs up to everything in this wonderful fic.

((also i screamed because sehun best character oops))

okay i love you and this omg you are so perfect just why ♥

aoza June 16 2014, 05:10:06 UTC

told you guys i can write something happy! granted it didn't start out that way, but heeeeeey, the end justifies the means!

((i knew you'd like the sehun cameo. hahah♥))

kirakirashahida June 16 2014, 07:30:51 UTC

maybe i'm a little biased but tears didn't come to me until jongin's part when he visited her ;__; i mean yeah i get that feeling of regret that he never told her he loved-loves her and wishes he did although that means he could get rejected, but at least she would know and now she won't ever know (at least he thinks so) and that sucks even more.

((((whispers a changyoon spinoff))))

aoza June 16 2014, 07:44:20 UTC

writing kai's parts was actually a lot more emotionally draining for me than writing taemin's. probably because in this universe, it's kai that suffered the most because he's technically left alone til taemin finally got his head out of his ass and helped him out but that's just me.

((((shhh maybe i'll work on it))))

kirakirashahida June 16 2014, 09:04:49 UTC

i agree because taemin had soojung before and now he has jinri but jongin has always been by himself so it cuts deeper for him because unlike taemin, he has no one in particular to comfort him and help him to move on.

lol i know i'm the one suggesting but you promised!

aoza June 17 2014, 14:11:11 UTC

like i said, maybe i'll work on it.

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aoza June 23 2014, 17:08:54 UTC

ah, but alas this is the last for this fic universe. :) which is pretty awesome, considering this 3-shot series is actually my first foray into writing for the exo-het fandom. i'm glad you like my kaistal in this, ngl they were my favorite to write (along w/ the taestal tbh).

taelli is so cute. ♥ i just want them together.