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Perfect

Nov 06, 2010 21:07

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bollywoodrecord November 6 2010, 17:30:52 UTC

"No, we're not. You and Minho are though, Yuri-shii."

Aw... This was so sad. Changmin, why did you say that to her?!?! Well, I loved it, no matter how angsty it was... Thanks. :'D

aoza November 7 2010, 07:05:17 UTC

I almost only write angst, so... :))
Thanks for reading, ♥

bamthegreat November 6 2010, 20:59:07 UTC

this is so sad. :( I am more of a MinYul shipper but I prefer ChangRi more than ChangNa. T_____________T

aoza November 7 2010, 07:04:11 UTC

I'm a Minho/Yuri shipper too, but this was the prompt so~ ♥ Yoona's like my SNSD bias, I couldn't help it. :D

Thanks for reading though!

yultiforever November 6 2010, 22:44:54 UTC

nice angst! I love how minho was stammering and defending himself at the end ;)

aoza November 7 2010, 07:05:53 UTC

Thank you for reading!

filthyjones November 7 2010, 01:01:14 UTC

OH MY GOSH, FINALLY!!
I literally shrieked when I saw your comment in my inbox bb!
Admittedly, this was different from what I'd pictured it to be but you've pulled it off better than what I had expected any author could have done for my prompt ♥♥♥

Changmin feels so in character here that I can picture him with that small, hesitant smile... I can't say much for Yuri since I don't really monitor her but I always thought there was a perpetual look of idk, heartbreak? on her face. Like she always has these deep, consuming thoughts in rl. IDK. You dragged Yoona into this! XD *hands over scooby-doo cookies* And...

(You still tease him sometimes, saying "Hey, we're perfect for each other, oppa!" and grinning. And he still smiles but it's not like how he used to. You tell yourself you shouldn't tease him anymore, but sometimes your heart feels the need to say it and so you do. Over and over again, despite the way your heart breaks. Once, he even responded, with his hand on the slope of her back and a brightness in his eyes (something you' ( ... )

aoza November 7 2010, 07:24:34 UTC

I am guilty of monitoring Changmin sometimes ♥ Glad it came in handy with this fic! :D And lol, of course I dragged Yoona into this! It's my oneshot; I hold the power! ♥

Hahaha, I rewrote that paragraph about 4 times tbh :)) I didn't know how to end the fic lol~

Yey, ChangNa plotbunny! I shall wait for it!

forevermyworld November 7 2010, 07:58:42 UTC

your angst is amazingggg! the last few paragraphs really did it for me. :(

i don't follow any of these people(except changmin, b/c he's dbsk, and yeah.) but i loved it.HAHA.

aoza November 7 2010, 08:15:05 UTC

Hahaha, I write angst best, definitely :))♥ Changmin is just awesome. You should totally follow him! XD

Thanks for reading!