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Contest Entry - Fanfiction: Of Secrets, Scars, and Some Other Things

Oct 27, 2006 21:14

Title: Of Secrets, Scars, and Some Other Things
Author: Ten
E-mail: tenebris@livejournal.com
Theme: Contest theme "secrets," IchiRuki theme 36, "scars"
Rating: Oh, the swearing! Oh, the F-word! Soft R.
Word count: 8, 860
Bleach is...: Not mine! It's KT's and some other...random people's. BTW, thank you, KT, for the inspirationDedication: To ( Read more... )

Comments 10

mparf October 28 2006, 05:02:41 UTC

That really was beautiful...

tenebris October 29 2006, 06:33:19 UTC

Thank you! This comment took me off guard, 'cause I've never seen it as a beautiful 'fic. *blush* But thank you, again!

quickthorne October 28 2006, 07:07:30 UTC

... Oooh. Shiny. When I have something constructive to say I'll say it, but until then... Loved it, so so much. A follow up would be wonderful and loved and petted and did I mention the wonderful? But see me with no expectations. *totally, completely innocent*

tenebris October 29 2006, 07:03:47 UTC

*grin* Thank you; I'm glad I hadn't rubbed all the shiny off in the rewrite. (This fic has some history to it. *cough*ramblinprose*cough*) *laughs* And we'll see about the follow-up. At this point, I'm wondering if the fic even needs it.

Thank you again for commenting! I would love to hear your constructive comments as well ;)

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tenebris October 29 2006, 07:06:00 UTC

Thank you! The idea of Ichigo being totally oblivious to what those scars actually mean is something I've been wanting to do for--oh, forever, I think. And I'm glad Rukia's speech actually came across all right; that I really wasn't sure about. And aww, thanks! That's an amazing compliment. *^^*

jaina October 28 2006, 15:07:14 UTC

Y, nice icon ya got thar. *beams* *mamboleos*

I know you know what I think of this, but eh. COMMENTS ARE MORE GOODER. I <3. You really did kick ass on this the more you wrote and polished and now it's all shiny. YAY LICKING. Yay for Rukia being strong and not blowing him, cuz that would just fuck things up for the moment. Not sure what my favorite bit is--possibly Rukia using the work "copulate," because, yes.

Is goodfic. Stands well on its own. ;) G'job, dearie, wave those brain arms proudly.

tenebris October 29 2006, 07:13:17 UTC

Y, right back at you! *mamboleos the brain arms*

Hey, I like that you comment--it's different! Spicy! New! And I'm actually kinda amazed what the complete rewrite/polish did. It makes me tempted to do it to all of them, as scary as that sounds. And heh, Rukia even thinking about blowing him in that moment was all stimulus-response--"HEY, I can do something about that!"--and you know she wouldn't have gone through with it even if Ichigo weren't at a terrible place for that sort of thing. Not her thing. Not yet.

Thank ye thank ye *BIG ASS WHEW* And I do! *mamboleos some more*

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tenebris October 29 2006, 07:18:16 UTC

Yours is a ninja presence. ;) But it was there, and I appreciate it.

Thank you thank you! And one has to lay out ones post-Bleach theories wherever one can, and that's a big one for me ;). And aww, yay! I'm glad that came across. During beta, Ray said that "Rukia is retelling the story of Bleach with her tongue" and...well, she wasn't very far off. As to that last comment...I seem to have entered a very strong "UST UST UST" phase of ficcing, so...easy to avoid those things. And thanks, again! ♥