Sleeping Prodigy part 2/?

May 16, 2008 11:02


The Sleeping Prodigy
by me (alternatively known as iceshade or demon m-chan depending on which site this is being posted on), self-betaed 
Part 2 of ?

Warnings: same as before
Rating: PG-13ish (for this part)
Pairings: TezukaFuji, hints of Golden Pair, AkustuDan, Platinum Pair (YagyuuNiou) among others
Disclaimer: Konomi-sensei is a genius; he created ( Read more... )

fic, rating: pg-13, fractured fairy tales, tezufuji, sleeping prodigy, yaoi, tenipuri

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tacuma811 May 16 2008, 18:34:54 UTC
That was a great chapter! And you end it with a cliffhanger! Evil!!! I wanna know what will happen next!!

Yagyuu is one of my favorite characters, but not many people write about him, only in NiouYagyuu fics. I'm glad he is one of the main characters in this chapter!!! ^___^

Btw, I prefer shorter chapters and quicker updates, if you don't mind.

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iceshade May 18 2008, 18:00:06 UTC
I love yagyuu too, possibly because I feel he is one of the few people who can semi-control niou, (and niou is one of my favorite characters) but there isn't going to be much else yagyuu without niou because they just go together :3
and I didn't make the cliffhanger as evil as I could have, but I felt bad for going so long without updating, so I gave a BIG hint as to who it was...

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tacuma811 May 19 2008, 08:02:07 UTC
Too bad, but you already wrote a lot about Yagyuu in this chap, so I'm happy ^__^ Besides that, I love Fuji even more XD
True, you gave a big hint! I should thank you for the hint, the cliffhanger would be worse without it! So, thank you!!! XD

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paranoid_fridge May 16 2008, 21:22:34 UTC
Waaahh~ Great! Absolutely great!

And even though Sleeping Beauty is great, I like your remake even better. has action, drama while not being to heavy) That chapter was just ... the thing I needed after a long, long day. Really!

Am looking forward to the next part!

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iceshade May 18 2008, 18:02:46 UTC
thank you very much! ^^
one of the very few things I dislike about fairytales and disney is that as soon as the hero and the princess meet, they fall in love. and even though it might be love at first sight for fuji, I still want him and tezuka to get to know each other... and the original is just too short anyways...

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chibikaoruchan May 19 2008, 18:07:58 UTC
I so totally agree! I don't really like when it's too perfect-love-at-first-sight-with-happy-ending-right-away. ^^;;

And this chap is LOVE <3333 (You make me wanna finish 2nd chapter of Shirayuki-hime right away...) >_< Please, please upload next chappie fast! I can't stand such a cliffhanger!! >__

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ookami_fuu May 17 2008, 02:56:38 UTC
Wait, so Fuji supposedly pretended to be a girl here or is he infact, a she? By the way, wouldn't 'Chip' be more suitable for a chipmunk instead of a squirrel? But ah well, you're the writer here and I'm the reader, so who am I to complain? ^___^;

Oh, speaking of which, I love how you took the idea from sleeping beauty, but yet still keeping the story refreshing and unique, unlike the usually boring sleeping beauty. Update soon! (that was VERY evil of you to end it in a cliffhanger like that >___<;;)

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iceshade May 18 2008, 18:08:14 UTC
the whole why-is-fujiko-a-girl I plan on fully explaining in part 4, for now it's a secret, (though I will touch upon it in part 3)
and originally I had named the squirrel Pip, as I had just watched enchanted for the first time (finally), but then realized what I had done, so I changed it to Chip. and I used a squirrel not a chipmunk b/c in my mind squirrels are more spaztic and could be used better for my purposes, and I hadn't even thought of using a chipmunk... howabout he's a squirrel having an identity crisis?
and thank you for your kind review!

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a1y_puff May 18 2008, 07:41:21 UTC
nyaaaaaaaah~ meanie!!!
Is that new person Yumiko?

next chappie soon please? aww, Tezuka and uji have just met >.<
more, MORE D:
eheheh~

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iceshade May 18 2008, 18:09:53 UTC
the moar is coming :D
I reveal who the person is right away so you don't have to worry... I'm glad you like it... ^^

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