fic: Games Adults Play (5/6)

[icedteainthebag]

Title: Games Adults Play (5/6)
Author: icedteainthebag
Pairings: Bill Adama/Ellen Tigh/Laura Roslin, think square dancing + Saul, Adama/Roslin
Rating: Um, super MA
Summary: Ellen's return to the Fleet brings complications to Bill and Laura's lives.
Word Count: 4,500
Notes: Written for the bsg_epics ship swap exchange in order to fulfill wishflsinfl's request of Bill/Laura/Ellen,

Comments

[wishflsinfl]

I'm speechless. I just read this on my phone, in a public place and now I know how you felt when I sprang Gaius and Laura on you at work. : O

I'll be back tomorrow with detailed comments but know that I think this is amazing. It's hot and beautiful and a little harrowing and so complex. You found such an original angle to come at this scene and just nailed it.

I absolutely love it.

[icedteainthebag]

You and your public porning! How does it feel? Don't answer that...

Thank you so much for the comment. Now I can go to bed happy.

[wishflsinfl]

Hey, I can't help it if you posted this when I wasn't home! I sure as hell wasn't going to wait two hours to read it.

You know, of all the ways I imagined you might make this sex scene happen (and there were many) this wasn't one of them. Not even close. The way you surprised me made me stupidly happy.

The contrast between the hot, dirty, primal fucking at the beginning and the intimacy that follows after Ellen leaves is incredible. It's undeniably hot and there's so much more going on. You really have done the impossible in making this work and keeping the characters in character.

A spark of determination flickered across the woman's face. "I've done this before."

The competitiveness between Laura and Ellen works so well. I love that they're both upping the ante until it's too late to turn back and obviously both a little turned on by the power struggle and the fact that Bill is watching the whole thing. And Bill is such a guy, not wanting to pass up the chance to see them frakking.

He savored it and then pulled away, licking

[somadanne]

I sure as hell wasn't going to wait two hours to read it.

Hee! I decided I had to wait until my kids went to bed, and that seemed to be hours and hours after I saw the post go up, though it actually wasn't.

[wishflsinfl]

Waiting until the kids are in bed I can understand. :D

And where is part 6?

[icedteainthebag]

Hold on! I've been hanging out with my kids. Lolol.

[wishflsinfl]

Don't they have barbies they could be tattooing or something?

[icedteainthebag]

There are things about my life they will never know.

Let's start with authoring threesome porn and the barbie tattooing.

[icedteainthebag]

This is epic feedback! Especially about Bill Adama's Super Dick. I didn't even think about recovery time when I wrote this. The man's a fucking machine! I mean he didn't even take off his underwear when he did Ellen. BECAUSE HE DIDN'T HAVE TO.

The contrast between the hot, dirty, primal fucking at the beginning and the intimacy that follows after Ellen leaves is incredible.

Thank you. I wanted to do that 180 because I think they would have realized what they really wanted, and had no reason to stop after all that bizarre eye-fucking shit.

I literally stopped breathing for a moment. Guh.

Yeah, you and me both. And Ellen wiping her mouth just about kills me. Yes, sometimes I like my own porn that much.

It was about here that I started to think that this is one of the strangest sex scenes I've ever read.

YES. Isn't it strange? Strange but oddly fucking hot? I don't even know. It's something I will ponder for quite some time, I think. Not that it's a bad thing. Glad it strangely worked for you. lol.

They're nude, they've gotten

[wishflsinfl]

I mean he didn't even take off his underwear when he did Ellen. BECAUSE HE DIDN'T HAVE TO.

I only caught this on like the third reading. He's such a stud.

Strange but oddly fucking hot?

OMG, yes. This story will be with me for a long time.

Yeah, how awkward is that? But I'm glad their first kiss wasn't in front of Ellen.

Awkward in the best kind of way. Them being all romantic in front of Ellen would have been bizarre. And yet the hot dirty fucking I seem to have no problem with. Go figure.

[mary_me11]

icedteainthebag recommended your story “Here Falls Now” after I told her I like to ship Laura with different men but one pairing I had big problems with would be Laura/Baltar.
And I have to say…I’m very surprised about myself, because I can’t believe how much I enjoyed reading your story!`?!?!?!
Usually I stop reading this pairing after a few lines because the story feels wrong and unbelievable and I feel uncomfortable reading it but….
“Here Falls Now” was interesting, very well written, felt for me very in character and like I said already I enjoy reading it a lot!!!
Did you write more Laura/? stories than this one???

[wishflsinfl]

Glad to hear you enjoyed it! It's especially exciting to know that someone who doesn't like Laura and Gauis together enjoyed the story.

The long stories I've written are all Laura/Bill but I've written some ficlets and drabbles for Laura with a whole bunch of other people. They're mostly linked from LJ but f-locked because they're all MA rated (and in some cases super MA!). Let me know if you want to read them and I'll add you.

[mary_me11]

I would love to read them, Thank you!!!!