Unwound (4/4)

[icedteainthebag]

Title: Unwound (4/4)
Author: icedteainthebag
Word Count: 1,524
Rating: MA
Pairings: Bill Adama/Carolanne Adama, Bill Adama/Ellen Tigh
Summary: Unwinding the labyrinth.
Notes: tjonesy bought my services in the help_haiti auction and requested a story in which Bill and Ellen frakked. This is what happened. Thanks to her for inspiring me to write it and putting her foot up my ass

Comments

[bsg_aussiegirl]

I was not expecting this ending you know. I think I need an epilogue now. Maybe their wedding? LOL.

I love Bill's description of reading/choosing a book btw. Made me think about slow sex with Bill Adama and the book and glasses on the shelf above Laura's rack in Disquiet. Guh.

[icedteainthebag]

The ending was unexpected. Tell me what you mean by that! I've been told by others it was a very predictable ending and I'd love to know what you thought.

I thought about writing a wedding scene into this fic, but decided to leave it hanging.

Made me think about slow sex with Bill Adama and the book and glasses on the shelf above Laura's rack in Disquiet. Guh.

I may have had a similar thought. Gah.

Thanks for reading. I know it wasn't quite your thing.

[bsg_aussiegirl]

I just never expected Saul and Ellen to jump into bed quite so fast. I thought they might not even meet. I know you love Ellen and I'm surprised you made her into a bit of a tart with that. (Although we all know she wouldn't be able to help herself with the epicness that is Saul Tigh.)

I was also surprised you made Bill so angry and emo about it. I know Bill is an emotional guy but I still think it was merely a one night stand for him. I didn't think he had any great feelings for her. Let's face it - he never even asked her name for a long while. I just sort of thought he would go 'oh well - at least I know I can still give good secksing, let's move on'.

[icedteainthebag]

I don't see her as a tart, actually. Is it weird that I saw the entire thing as pretty romantic in a fucked up way? Saul and Ellen belong together; their attraction was immediately undeniable. Hell, they've been together before and they don't even know it yet. I can imagine the feeling inside of them is something like finding someone you've loved for your entire life who you thought you'd lost, and yet, you don't even know why you're having that feeling.

Also, I think it's interesting that you said Ellen's a tart when Saul's the one boffing his buddy's gal he just had the night before. What does that make Saul?

And who knows! Maybe they were just talking. ;)

I was also surprised you made Bill so angry and emo about it. I know Bill is an emotional guy but I still think it was merely a one night stand for him. I didn't think he had any great feelings for her. Let's face it - he never even asked her name for a long while. I just sort of thought he would go 'oh well - at least I know I can still give good secksing, let's move on'.There

[bsg_aussiegirl]

I didn't say I didn't think Saul was a tart. I said I was surprised you would make Ellen one given your love for her. I don't know you have such love for Saul - lol. SO, PLEASE, don't get me into the debate about women being sluts again. I do not think anyone who sleeps with more than one man is a slut ok? Gods. Anyway, I just didn't think they would sleep together. I just thought there would be the attraction but you would leave it at that. So I'm surprised and I didn't think it was a predictable ending at all (which is a good thing).

And yes, I'm writing this, what 4 days?, later because I've been to see Mary frakkin' McDonnell. *dances around your post dropping Mary fairy dust*

[icedteainthebag]

OMG I TAKE HIGH OFFENSE AT YOUR ASSUMPTION THAT SLUTS ARE BAD.

I'm so happy you met her. :)