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[icedark_elf]

Okay. As we all know, due to laylah's wonderful gendercrack( Strange Materia and Strange Requests), I wrote Strange Places. That spawned a sequel in my head, and now we have Zack and Girl!Cloud on a date. Smut will happen. So very not safe for work.

Comments

[laylah]

am so sorry it took me this long to get back to you! omg!

Aaaw, so cute! I love that Cloud's not a pushover, that he's getting comfortable enough with Zack and with himself to be able to flirt back.
Sure, go ahead and unlock it! ^_^

[icedark_elf]

*grins* Glad you liked it. I just unlocked and adjusted the date. Don't think the link has changed, but here's the new one anyway.

Ficness

I'm rather proud of it. My first het porn.

[eternal_edge]

“I’m,” Zack said softly, “am going to have to try this position again.”

Oh yes, yes you are. Maybe in a jam packed train, where they could be discovered oh so easliy. Or maybe in a filled elevator that stops in the middle of two floors due to a blackout where there is no light but plenty of people. (I read a fic where that happened once, in another fandom. My god it was HOT)

::coughs::

Um, yeah. This whole sex in public thing? I like. ::blushes:: Now the interesting thing would be if Cloud because preggers due to this incident... >]

[icedark_elf]

*grins* I've seemed to have picked up this public sex bug, and you are feeding it. Stop that.

Now I got to figure out how to do one of those with some of the foursome.

*grins* I don't think he stays a girl long enough for that, but it would be a mess.

But did you like the fic?

[eternal_edge]

oh, oops. haha, yes, I loved this. As for the whole pregnant thing...well, maybe the materia won't let Cloud turn back because he's pregnant. Or, they could just keet casting the materia on him to keep the baby. I dunno, me thinks i've been reading too many naruto mpreg fics... XD Still, Zack as a dad, now there's something I'd like to see. He would so freak.

Btw, you prob all ready figured this out but the because up in my first comment should be became. ^^;;;

[icedark_elf]

*headdesk* Gah. The ideas running through my head.

I hate you. Really.

Glad you enjoyed the fic, btw. It's nice to know that it turned out halfway decent.

[hakainokami]

My brain is ded from teh hawt now. I can't even spell.

Anyway, let me know what I can do to make it better.
Write more of it? Add sephiroth? on a train? on a Chocobo? I'm not usually big on the het sex, but..wow.

[icedark_elf]

*flushes with happiness*

I've never written het before, so I was worried. I'd glad you like it.

God, people, stop giving me suggestions.

Now I have the mental image of Seph getting a blowjob from Cloud during a meeting, because Cloud is hiding under his desk. Why, I don't know yet, but I want to do it.

Glad you liked it. I was rather worried. Now I just need to find somewhere to crosspost it.

[electrainverted]

*giggles* That would be an amusing scene! Cloud hiding under the table... *ded*

[electrainverted]

Kyaan. *grin* Love their interactions in this, and yes, skirts are good for easy access. (even if it's het sex. =P )

[icedark_elf]

Skirt!

I have more fic ideas. Like Cloud grows up while away on a longer posting. Like, I don't know, he's stationed elsewhere, or Seph and Zack are, for six or seven months, and when they meet again, he looks much older than when he left.

Cloud leaves: Foot shorter than Zack, slender and still looking rather childish.

Cloud comes back: Almost as tall as Zack, broad shoulders stronger built, and loooks HOT!

[electrainverted]

*grin* Sounds like a fun idea. =D

(And omg. D: I've planed more or less all of Storm now, and it looks so MUCH... well, for me.)

[miko_no_da]

Yum. Purr. *melts and squirms* Oh my. You make het fun. Actually, that materia makes het fun. *snickers* Lucky Cloud!

[icedark_elf]

*never got this comment through her email*

Thanks. I'm thrilled that I'm allowed to play with said materia.

Very lucky Cloud. *grins*

Glad you liked it. *hands you a napkin* I'm glad my first het came out so well.