[books] Riley Jenson Series Book 5 Embraced by Darkness by Keri Arthur
If the other books on the Riley Jenson series got a 2, this one gets a half star. I barely even read it. Okay, I read it, but I half skimmed it, finishing it in one hour. It probably has to do with the fact that the most interesting things in the series were not in the book namely psycho guardian Vampire and extremely old masochist vampire who keeps coming back for Riley.
Even the entire mystery/investigation the directorate was after in this particular book was half-assed. They had TWO investigations going on, unlike the other books where there was one investigation which was streamlined into an entire story arc.
This book seemed like an attempt to introduce more potential men into Riley's bed (which thankfully, hasn't happened yet. She has kept to the 'three men' rule ... or the author has anyway... in which there are only three significant men in one book and all the rest are one night stands...) and eliminate some of them.
Although Kellen has been given time in this book, he just doesn't fill the role Quinn has left behind. Even though Kellen is alpha, Quinn, apparently, is more so. So Kellen has issues about being less 'manly' than vampire. (Ok, this just gives me a weird Anita flash back about her triumvirate and Richard, Anita and Jean-Claude)
It has solidified my belief though, that even if there might be MORE introductions in the future, the author will not place anyone other than Quinn in the role of Riley's soulmate. Even if he is a vampire and goes againts her motherly instinct (which I can't get anyway since she's sterile too... even if she's temporarily fertile right now).
The only thing worth mentioning in this book is Dia's prophesy about what will happen in Riley's life choices, which although prophetic for Riley herself, doesn't really come as a shock to me. Obviously she'd have difficulty with monogamy and obviously the choice that's going to be offered to her isn't something that she would normally think of. Her brother is obviously one of the men in her life, the other is Quinn, and I have a sneaking suspicion that the remaining person is going to be filled by Cole... or maybe it's Shadow..., although all bets are off, and I DEFINITELY do not think it's going to be Kellen.
More over, I just knew this was going to be how the book was going to end, simply becuase it is the pattern of how all of Riley's decicions have been taking. She doesn't want to commit most of the time (because she's a wolf) and when she finally decides she wants to, her chosen mate decides he can't. I mean, I understand if it even CAME from the same guy (albiet it has given me endless frustration), but Kellen and Quinn are two different animals all together and apparently have different twists on the same issues. Kellen isn't more alpha than Riley and Quinn can't handle the polygamy. Kellen decides he doesn't want to commit until Riley quits her job, and Quinn has already decided he wants her but Riley can't because he's infertile and has betrayed her trust.
For someone who advises heaps of compromise for her brother, Riley just doesn't find compromise.
This series NEEDS to end. Just one more book to end all of the romantic entanglements because the cycle is repetitive and old. New characters and a new story might get her into a new and better perspective in her story telling and might get her out of the cyclic, I want to be with you but can't angle. Her directorate investigations are good. The world building shows promise, it's all of these issues dealing with sex (the author wanting to show that she is a progressive thinker) and monogamy and basically romantic entanglements that have me throwing this against the wall. The only reason I managed through this book was because as I said it showed some promise... If the author actually fixes the 'romance' it might be worth reading again.
Even the entire mystery/investigation the directorate was after in this particular book was half-assed. They had TWO investigations going on, unlike the other books where there was one investigation which was streamlined into an entire story arc.
This book seemed like an attempt to introduce more potential men into Riley's bed (which thankfully, hasn't happened yet. She has kept to the 'three men' rule ... or the author has anyway... in which there are only three significant men in one book and all the rest are one night stands...) and eliminate some of them.
Although Kellen has been given time in this book, he just doesn't fill the role Quinn has left behind. Even though Kellen is alpha, Quinn, apparently, is more so. So Kellen has issues about being less 'manly' than vampire. (Ok, this just gives me a weird Anita flash back about her triumvirate and Richard, Anita and Jean-Claude)
It has solidified my belief though, that even if there might be MORE introductions in the future, the author will not place anyone other than Quinn in the role of Riley's soulmate. Even if he is a vampire and goes againts her motherly instinct (which I can't get anyway since she's sterile too... even if she's temporarily fertile right now).
The only thing worth mentioning in this book is Dia's prophesy about what will happen in Riley's life choices, which although prophetic for Riley herself, doesn't really come as a shock to me. Obviously she'd have difficulty with monogamy and obviously the choice that's going to be offered to her isn't something that she would normally think of. Her brother is obviously one of the men in her life, the other is Quinn, and I have a sneaking suspicion that the remaining person is going to be filled by Cole... or maybe it's Shadow..., although all bets are off, and I DEFINITELY do not think it's going to be Kellen.
More over, I just knew this was going to be how the book was going to end, simply becuase it is the pattern of how all of Riley's decicions have been taking. She doesn't want to commit most of the time (because she's a wolf) and when she finally decides she wants to, her chosen mate decides he can't. I mean, I understand if it even CAME from the same guy (albiet it has given me endless frustration), but Kellen and Quinn are two different animals all together and apparently have different twists on the same issues. Kellen isn't more alpha than Riley and Quinn can't handle the polygamy. Kellen decides he doesn't want to commit until Riley quits her job, and Quinn has already decided he wants her but Riley can't because he's infertile and has betrayed her trust.
For someone who advises heaps of compromise for her brother, Riley just doesn't find compromise.
This series NEEDS to end. Just one more book to end all of the romantic entanglements because the cycle is repetitive and old. New characters and a new story might get her into a new and better perspective in her story telling and might get her out of the cyclic, I want to be with you but can't angle. Her directorate investigations are good. The world building shows promise, it's all of these issues dealing with sex (the author wanting to show that she is a progressive thinker) and monogamy and basically romantic entanglements that have me throwing this against the wall. The only reason I managed through this book was because as I said it showed some promise... If the author actually fixes the 'romance' it might be worth reading again.