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lisapy74 October 13 2012, 05:15:58 UTC
How many times can one person's heart break?? Ugh, you're killing me!!

HA! I love when Max goes after Marchand, lol!! Thank you for putting that in there!! <3

And then Max realizes Kevin's been hurt and doesn't want to leave his side.

And this part, oh I LOVE it:

“Thank you for taking care of me,” Kevin says, watching Maxim’s hands, “you’re so patient and nice. You’d be a good daddy. I want you to have my babies,” he says, and Maxim kind of chokes.

“Euh, what?”

“It’s okay. If you’re worried about losing your girlish figure, you don’t have to,” Kevin says, touches Maxim’s stomach and smiles at him. “It’s okay, I’ll have the babies.”

“Euh.” Maxim stares up at Kevin, feels himself turn scarlet, open-mouthed and speechless. How - how are they talking about this, about Maxim getting knocked up - or Kevin, apparently, just - what?

“They’d be so cute,” Kevin says, as Maxim goes back to unbuttoning his shirt for him, fumbles every button as he goes. “Blue eyes. But dark hair, and your smile. Okay?”

That is just perfect!!

“Kiss me, Maxi,” he pleads, and Maxim leans down to kiss him before he can even think it through. It’s a too-long moment before he pulls away, realises what he’s doing, and it’s stupid. Kevin only - only wants him when he’s drunk, or when he’s on drugs, doesn’t want him for real, and all Maxim can do is take advantage of Kevin, and what the fuck is wrong with him, doing this to Kevin.

God, poor Max, thinking Kevin only wants him when he's drunk or on drugs! Poor baby!

And you broke Kevin!! :(

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ice_hot_13 October 15 2012, 05:44:18 UTC
ahahah Marchand gets it :D

and poor kevinnnnnnnnnnn

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lisapy74 November 11 2012, 07:52:39 UTC
Yeah, that should totally happen in every fic you write!! Marchand gets it!! :D :D I'm evil, lol!!!

Oh god, broken Kevin just kills me!!! I need to remember to put a box of tissues by the computer. Beautiful disaster these two!! <33 Love it!!

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