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Sep 09, 2004 12:24

Observations of History class for today:
1. Ms. Walsh doesn't look good in a poof
2. Emily G. is wearing white panties (damn those girls who can wear miniskirts and get away with it!)
3. The lines for 12 and 6 on the clock aren't perpendicular with the floor.
4. the walls are completely white, under all the posters and clutter of images that are so distracting.
5. Ms. Walsh checks everyone's hw in alphabetical order
6. I don't know Caronline's last name...
7. I think the humidity trapped in the building generally makes people more lethargic. They really need air conditioning. Because, cold air does make people focus better actually. Because warm air makes you sleepy... it makes sense.
8. "do you like to write?" "uhh, I do just a little bit of creative writing..." "yeah, I can tell"
9. Thesis statements are hard.

This is my thesis statement. I've got the argument I want to make down, but I need help in making it more interesting. Suggestions, please?
"Hierarchy negatively affected anyone other than wealthy, white plantation owners with a lot of slaves in Manchester county, as well as in the rest of the southern world in the mid 1800s."
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