[story] pop you go

[ib_archive]

author: strangesingaporean (hellsings_home)

Comments

[denkichan]

Sweet story and the format was very clever! It's been a while since I've read a first person story without the character sounding like A Narrator, so this was really refreshing to read - thank you and great job!

[sub_divided]

I have to tell you, I really like this story. It's intense!!!

Apologizes if I "corrected" anything that was wonky on purpose, XD.

[dmjewelle]

I like the short sentences and how it keeps the action going. The tie-in to music and sound effects was also a good touch. Thank you for the read!