[story] the legend of the horse & girl (angry souls remix)

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author: REI

Comments

[canis_m]

As soon as I saw the title I knew what this one was and I had to click immediately! I'm so glad you wrote a version of this! and gave us the untold tengu side of the story.

But poor poor jealous tengu, left out in the cold al;sjdlskdjfk w-was I supposed to laugh at his pain, I wasn't was I, s-sorry tengu I kind of laughed.

the wind god conjures up a storm, just for propriety

XD ♥

[rei_kurasaki]

with a legend like that, HOW CAN ONE RESIST. i would write dragon x old man, but i fear my brain is not so strong haha.

and no, you were not suppose to laugh at the tengu ): POOR TENGU. FOREVER ALONE, etc.

[mistressnaoko]

That was an interesting retelling. Thank you.

[bratfarrar]

...A very weird story, but a very nice retelling. I did like the forest god rather much.

[sub_divided]

Pretty awesome horse god. I like that he was able to see the goodness of the girl, even though she was a peasant, and I'm glad they got to be together at the end.

[strikesoftly]

Fantastic retelling. You've got some lovely turns of phrase in this as well, and I especially liked your handle on vivid imagery.